• Member Since 24th Jul, 2011
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StreakTheFox


Also known as HUE JACKMAN!


Comments ( 1152 )

:ajbemused:
:applejackconfused:
:derpyderp1:
:derpyderp2:
:pinkiegasp:
:rainbowderp:

That about sums up my reaction. I'm still trying to decide what rating to give...

:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
:pinkiesick:

wtf did I just read?! I don't know whether to like it or not. This has seriously de-railed my train of thought.

YES!!!

I loved this when I first saw it from Ponibooru comments! Now that it's here, I am ecstatic! Can't wait for the next chapter!

#4 · Jul 25th, 2011 · · · Part 5 ·

:pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:
Omg, why am I reading this! And I felt like puking through Princess Celestia and Big Mac and Applejack episode.
:pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

I love this. Why do I love this. I shouldn't love this story, but I do.

#6 · Jul 25th, 2011 · · · Part 1 ·

Thank you for the downlaod button!

I love this story!:rainbowkiss:

#7 · Jul 25th, 2011 · · · Part 4 ·

:raritydespair:

Rarity rape!

#8 · Jul 25th, 2011 · · · Part 5 ·

double rape!:heart:

Yes!

...Man...im such a creep.... BUT IM PROUD!

#9 · Jul 25th, 2011 · · · Part 2 ·

Pink Rape!:pinkiehappy: yes, yes, yes!

Im such a creep...

Watever! On to the next chapter!

I guess celestia "tasted the rainbow".:rainbowlaugh:

Heh, get it?:derpytongue2:

This is so effing wrong, man. It's a total clopfic, however, it's fairly amusing in some places. I have to say, chapter 5 squicked me right the eff out, and I'm still pretty uncomfortable thinking about that one. I want to see how this all works out, so against my better judgment I'll keep reading...also, I don't think this can get any worse than chapter 5. I think we hit rock bottom in the perversion pit with that one. ::shivers:::pinkiesick:

712 Yeah...I feel unclean after that. I feel LIKE I WILL BE SOILED FOREVER

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

WHYBONER

:twilightoops:
WHY AM I STILL READING THIS?!?!?!

My god, this is worse than a train wreck and a Greek tradgity combined. It's like I want to look away but I can't, well at least this can't get as creepy as "cupcakes" but I might end up wrong. :twilightoops:

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Would you prefer it if I used explicit words? ;D

Oh dear lord, why I cannot stop reading this shit?:twilightoops:

It seems like every rape is more intense than the last...I hope Twilight is last.

1003

I'm actually very impressed with your abstinence of explicit wording, and yet able to still bring out the intensity of the erotica you're writing.

The subject matter is so wrong, but I can't stop reading. Keep going!

#22 · Aug 6th, 2011 · · · Part 5 ·

THIS. STORY. IS. AWESOOOOOOOOME!:trollestia:

#23 · Aug 6th, 2011 · · · Part 3 ·

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Hah! Funny!:rainbowlaugh:

Is it creepy, if not at the least mildly that I can't wait for the next chapter? Also, can't see the paragraph you have italicized on this format it seems, might just be the way i have it set though. Good job on this one.

WTF! I Don't Even.... :twilightoops:

lol trixy vs molestia...who will win:derpyderp2:

YES YES!:pinkiehappy:

CHAPTER 6!

I kinda wanted to read more of that "Flutter Shy Rape" scen... but whatever...

Damn just making Twilight submit to Molestia. I bet everypony's gonna have to watch too! OMG

I wanna get AJ and Big Mac's reactions too. Can't wait

I hate myself for loving this
:fluttershbad:

What about Applejack? GODDAMNIT WHAT HAPPENED TO APPLEJACK :applejackconfused:

I don't know what I'm reading, but I cannot look away...I cannot look away...

:derpyderp2:

This makes me want to cry. Molestia disturbs me. I want more.

This is the worst thing ive ever read :pinkiesick:. Morally of course. In all other respects its rather interesting :heart::heart::heart:

i feel like a monster for wishing for more Fluttershy rape though. Still, having Princess Celestia turn into Princess Molestia is just pure gold. Even if the erotica scenes are curiously turned down (im guessing its because this site doesnt allow true clop yet, i wonder if you or someone else will update the concept when it does?)

:pinkiecrazy::rainbowderp::raritydespair::twilightoops::unsuresweetie::eeyup::facehoof::trollestia:

That was... my reaction.

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The lack of true adult erotica is my own personal preferance. If I really really wanted to, I could write it with all the explicit little details... but that is something I chose to leave behind.

What is this I don't even...

1606

For the quote, is it the vampire queen Carmilla?

Also I felt disappointed with the fluttershy rape because it was by far the shortest scene from the rest. It was like *Bam* your rape and now for a smoke, while the others were more (without sounding creepy) detailed. But I still should feel sick for reading and enjoying this. :fluttercry: :pinkiesick:

I'm hoping the next chapter will have more details about Fluttershy's rape.
Unfortunately it looks like no chance of CMC rape, but I have high hopes for another rape threesome with Molestia/Trixie/Twilight.

1665 Nope.
The reason for a short fluttershy rape scene is because I love fluttershy, and I think her a bit too sweet to have burdened by a public rape scene.... may go back and change that though.

As for the reference....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gD_wyzSaMdk

:pinkiegasp:

So very wrong. :fluttershbad:

Please do continue.

The lack of explicit words, while maintaining the intensity of the scene is commendable.

I realised later i hadnt rated this, so i gave it five stars because i truly believe it deserves it. Unique concept, excellent characterization, author-bravery, and fantastic writing style. the fact you can avoid almost all references to anything truly explicit and still make it a good deal more erotic than most works is impressive and to be commended.

My one single request is that we see more from the reactions of the ponies post everything. i especially want to see the sheer awkwardness that Big Mac and AJ are gonna be going through once they wake up and have to clean themselves up. Someone helping Fluttershy deal with her issues would also be sweet, and Pinkie is still traumatised. Rarity actually seemed to enjoy it, and having such a variety of viewpoints could make for some truly interesting psychological work.

Im also really looking forward to how they all treat Celestia once she has been cured, and whether Luna will try to avoid blame for fear of being banished again.

So once again i say well done, you fantastic morally bankrupt genius. i also totally understand the decision to exclude Fluttershy rape if shes your favourite. I wanna protect her just as much :twilightsmile:

1665 I have several endings in mind, all too juicy to let go alone. SO, I am going to make alternate ending chapters, just to tickle my, and all of yours' fancies ;D

Oh Jesus, don't let Molestia do it with Spike and The CMC's. PLEASE LEAVE THEM THE &@%$ ALONE!:raritydespair:

If there are alt endings, I would love to see Trixe perform an EPIC FAIL and somehow end up with a weird and creative punishment. :twilightsheepish:

What a sexying ending....

Why am I still reading this?!:twilightangry2:

I can't stop....:fluttercry:

:rainbowlaugh: Yes,that was funny!

Is it just me,or do these icons fit the story?

:fluttershbad:

:pinkiegasp:

:raritydespair:

:twilightblush:

:rainbowwild:

... I really don't want to see how this ends.

But... I'm probably going to, anyway. :trixieshiftright:

Onto the next chapter!

Great and Powerful slumber... Okay, story. You're amazing and sleep shall be put on hold until you are finished.

:trollestia: vs :trixieshiftleft: (Something sick in me is loving this whole story)

:*bangs head against wall*
STOP READING THIS:flutterrage

But I can't.:fluttercry:

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