Okay, i can handle Grimdark just fine, but rape is a very different story. I sat just fine through Cupcakes, You Can't Trust Anypony, and countless other torture fics, but this is just plain wrong.
I don't see what is so bad, I have a dirty brain, so i like this fanfic :3 Im done with part 2. My only complaint. What's with all the rump grinding and hair rubbing Where's the horn penetration?!?!?!?!?
I Think this Fanfic is Great but cant the Scenes be more long and interesting
My complaint is The Scenes Are not Graphic enough they need to be more Like Pinkie getting Infiltrated by celestias horn or Screaming not just moaning or stabbing or Spike getting Laid and stuff cause that would be great
I understand why books were burned, now I want the set the internet on fire. Any way I feel like Hesher, this is interesting but im in no way aroused. To the rest of the audience if you got a boner, chop it off.
Pink Rape! yes, yes, yes!
Im such a creep...
Watever! On to the next chapter!
WHYBONER
WHY AM I STILL READING THIS?!?!?!
I don't know what I'm reading, but I cannot look away...I cannot look away...
Why am I still reading this?!
I can't stop....
... I really don't want to see how this ends.
But... I'm probably going to, anyway.
Onto the next chapter!
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what... how the... why am i here?
I feel this is like a train wreck. Regardless of how horrible it is (not the grammar, but content) we cannot move our eyes away.
Oh my....
0_0 wtf.
why am i still here?
ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
WHY CANT I STOP!!
Whaaaaahuhuhahuhahauahhauh?!?!
Oh god why did I get a boner from this ;-;
...........what the SHIT TACO JUST HAPPEND?
What a MIGHTY FINE STORY THIS IS. GHNF.
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STABLES AND HORSEFEATHERS MOLESTIA YOU'RE MAKING ME QUESTION.... hair....
...and poor Pinkiepie...
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Okay, i can handle Grimdark just fine, but rape is a very different story. I sat just fine through Cupcakes, You Can't Trust Anypony, and countless other torture fics, but this is just plain wrong.
im shocked that is all.
Hehehe
Why am i still reading this...
WHY.
poor pinkie
damn boner
Ehh could be more worst
No...NO..BONER...STOP!!!!
this emotic is soooo good
god i regret clicking this!
WHAT THE FUCK!??!!?!?
This...is...
This pleases Big Mac
lolwut?
785 WHY HOW COULD YOU BETRAY ME AT A TIME LIKE THIS
THIS! SHOULD! NOT! BE! SEXY!!!!!!
ALSO IM USING THE ROYAL VOICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First I was like then I was like then I was like then I was like
...
Went tooo far with the Spike scene...
I'm outta here.
To the author:
YOU ARE SICK. SICK AND PERVERTED. IS NOTHING SACRED? MY BRAIN THREW UP- I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW THAT WAS POSSIBLE.
5 stars, highly reccomend.
OK, this is quite disturbing to say the least
BUT CANT I STOP READING!
btw if you do ANYTHING to fluttershy...
I think you may want to watch your back
I don't see what is so bad, I have a dirty brain, so i like this fanfic :3
Im done with part 2. My only complaint.
What's with all the rump grinding and hair rubbing
Where's the horn penetration?!?!?!?!?
at first i was like then i was like then i was like then i was like and then i was like
why i'm i still reading this and why can't i stop?
ah this is the second time this happend you know the story Luna's magic wand.......well i can't stop reading it why me
Scene with Pinkie Pie comes along. "I've seen enough hentai to know where this-"
Oh, God. OH, GOD.
My brain just accidentally all over the computer.
OK. THIS IS THE LAST. TIME. STOP CLOPPING TO PONIES.
Poor Pinkie pie
WTF WHATS WRONG WITH YOU THATS DISGUSTING
Ive read the exact same Fanfic on FanFiction
BUT PINKIE PIE PART IS LIKE EWW EWW EWW EWW YOU DISGUSTING FUCK CELESTIA
YUCK YUCK YUCK LOL
I Agree.
I Think this Fanfic is Great but cant the Scenes be more long and interesting
My complaint is The Scenes Are not Graphic enough they need to be more Like Pinkie getting Infiltrated by celestias horn or Screaming not just moaning or stabbing or Spike getting Laid and stuff cause that would be great
Im so Sick oh well
First i was like then then then
THERE ARE NO WORDS. NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
I understand why books were burned, now I want the set the internet on fire.
Any way I feel like Hesher, this is interesting but im in no way aroused. To the rest of the audience if you got a boner, chop it off.