Rarity's started a family of her own.
Twilight's busy doing all her princess duties... and Spike?
He has nothing. At least not yet.
Applejack and Caramel have been engaged for almost two months now, and things have been going downhill. A psycho murderer is on the loose and many fillies and colts have gone into hiding.
After a huge mishap, Applejack might finally find the light in her life...
But it's too late.
With help from my best friend jetman24
This story came to me in a dream.
Rated Dark for a slight murder description, not much.
Rated Teen for some dark scenes and death.
Applespike not Carajack (Although I ship it)
I haven't written much Applejack so there you go.
Chapters (3)
WOOT WOOT!
Applespike!
Yus applespike
AWESOME ANOTHER APPLESPIKE! PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON!!!
6945926 Thanks!
You are very welcome
6937785 ? Good or bad?
6940043 <3
6962729 Good; definitely very good. I can't get enough of it.
6963139 <3
When do you intend to write another chapter?
6965746 I am right now!
AWESOME I CAN'T WAIT!!!
6965995 YAY!
Applespike FTW
6967585 Yep, thanks for the Fav <3
6967588 no problem, always like to see a new AppleSpike story
Somepony is going to die tonight. LOL JK
APPLEJACK TAKE SPIKE AND RUN, SCREW CARAMEL, CARAMEL IS DEAD, jk
love your story by the way.
6967588 Don't forget about the follow as well. ;)
6967634 <3 ya Have a follow back!
Good the promise of another chapter soon also I really hope that the chapters become less vague as the story goes
6967944 KK :P
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Another chapter?
Excellent.
One thing I don't get is I always thought that caramel was a family member in the show. Am I wrong?
6974314 nope xD
WHY IS SHE DATING A FAMILY MEMBER?!
6974621 He isn't her family, he's this background pony that some of us ship
Oh well I wouldn't know because pretty much all I do is like and save good fanfics and give feedback on their quality. I don't actually write them.
6974739 HEH, watch out for the next chapter!
Can you give me a non spoiler glimpse into the future of this story?
6976192 Sure xD
6976192 NEW CHAPTER WITH YOUR IDEAS!
Thanks I like it (of course anybody who had their ideas incorporated into a story would like it but I genuinely do like it).
6980005 LOL, I gave you credit!
thanks
I can tell you're invested, and this is an interesting idea. However, you need an editor. Your verb tenses are mixed up, your overall structure is messy, and your general organization is very poor. As someone who does write, I would rate this as a rough draft at best. I get the sense that there is plot worth exploring buried in here, but your writing just isn't clear enough to invest in finding it. Something I would suggest, if you're new to editing, is to try reading it out loud. Your ear will often catch things like bad phrasing and obvious grammar issues. Also, try to work on organizing the work into coherent paragraphs, it really helps the reader.
Good luck, and keep practicing.
6980673 I do have an editor and she's very helpful
6980673 Did you downvote it, I was looking?
6980673 If you knew more about me you wouldn't be saying that
Thanks for he down votes guys :(
6986300
In the prologue...
I think you may have been confused. It's alright, I had to look it up myself.
Google is a big helper in these situations. 
I do see how it can get confusing.
Have to show ownership of her cheek with a '.
Not the best of habits to do. There are better ways to emphasize. It is okay this once but try to limit using parentheses in this manner.
Needed a period instead of a comma.
"The" seems out of place so take it out.
Well I'm off to bed. Hope this helps.
I'm sure there is more to be done. 
6999936 thanks
Baby come back
You can blame it all on me
8/10 you have peaked my interest
(Side note spike is best character)