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pokefreak13


Clap and a half!

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Rainbow Dash wants to show her friend Fluttershy how much she means to her. So, what better way then to buy her Hearts and Hooves chocolates a few days after the holiday.

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Comments ( 14 )

Awww that was pretty cute

Aww, so cute!:rainbowkiss:
I hope there will be more chapters!^-^

Though this:

speckled jawbreakers the size of a newborn foal's eye

Sounds a little bit creepy:rainbowlaugh:

Thanks for letting me preread!

6932446 :rainbowlaugh: Yeah, originally I was going to compare it to a foal's head

6932756 thanks for writing it

Kinda fluffy, but I get the feeling that's what you were going for, so that's not really a problem. It was definitely cute, though.

Damn, this should have been expanded upon and given more detail, I liked where this was going.

What a sweet story. This deserves a fave. Good job! :yay:

Hehe, of course they're just best friends, what else can you think of?

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