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It has a few punctuation missing here and there and the perks at the end was interesting for me.
Otherwise - pretty good story.
I liked it.
Me Gusta
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Thanks for the feedback. Im still a developing writer so im always improving.
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Thanks. I dont know why i got the dislikes, nor do I care about them. I do what I like and like what I do. besides, everyone is entitled to their own opinion.
Here we go, tracking and green thumb coming right up!
Interesting, shall continue reading later
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Why thank you Chibz
Not bad man, lets see how this progresses
lol nice job with rhe rhyming, i see what you did there when you wanted to stop rhyming though hahah.
A couple good quotes:
several lolz were had
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That was the plan
I wonder if flare will ever be able to fly again
lol his main and tail are on fire
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I said the point of the story was primarily comedy
GAH it took me so long to finish reading this chapter. I want my comp back and I want it NOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!
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my pity
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Thank ye kindly
Lol to the wingboners...
Really dean?
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Yes. Yea indeed
good on you mate
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thank ye kindly, again
Almost caught up
but now he can't fly...humm
Edit: yes he can, duhhhh
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Yays
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lolol ok then!
Finally caught up
good work 
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And how was the dark.chap
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very dark indeed
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That was the plan
1925940 I couldn't resist
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wut?
Alright, so it does turns out I'm just an idiot that can't scroll down on a webpage.
However, I eventually found the story! After... you know.... being told three times where it was.... 
Interesting.......... Will read
later 
FINALLY! YOUR WRITING IMPROVES!
PERHAPS I SHOULD REMOVE MY CAPS LOCK? WHAT SAY YOU TWILIGHT?
uhhh, whatever you say chibz...
NA, THIS MAKES ME MUCH MORE BADASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sigh*
Hope you continue this. Great story so far.