Frost and I tend to collaborate on stories and pretend to know how to do it. In reality we just play games, write sad excuses for stories, and drink apple juice boxes.
Jack has always been a bit off, avoiding people, clinging to apple juice boxes as sustenance, and even making few friends in this bright and peppy world. A girl develops feelings for him but what happened in grade school forces him to decline her feelings.
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So cute. I can't wait for more.
I would try to get an editor for this story to help you out. I do like the concept though
IT's pretty good i'd get an editor though.
He should definitely get with her. Perhaps in a few years like High School maybe?
I'm not sure how far your story will go. For a moment I thought Twilight might have had a crush on him.
This was such a sweet chapter
Awwww... That's Adorable it was such a sweet chapter. Nice job!
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Aw... Adorable. Nice job.
This is so sad.
This isn't going to end with suicide is it?
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No, that is for another story.
Sad chapter, but cute ending
wheres the picture of the story from?