http://neronova00.deviantart.com/art/I-m-Sorry-I-m-Broken-605301272
"I'm sorry, I never meant to.... we should have... I should have never......"
Vinyl and Octavia have been dorm mates for almost a year and things have always been bad between them on the best of days, but things go too far and now not even forgiveness can make things the way they were. A life full of pain and broken dreams all comes to light as one of these mares comes to terms with who she has been for the last half of her life.
Chapters (3)
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"is" shouldn't be there.
You're missing a word. Try this;
7050332 Lol, I just mad derpy look smart, I thought your grammatical finds were part of the chapter, it took me a good ten min to see they were part of the description!
Will there be another chapter
7404881 As far as i have planned there will be plenty more to come, i hope to stick to my schedule and have the next chapter up this Friday
It's been sense last July sense this story was updated an now it's july again
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so sorry I never posted another chapter, life got in the way and I started going back to college, I don't know if I will ever finish this fan fic but I might pick my other one up again one day, for now, they are both cancelled tho.
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Awwwe I understand that I hope in the future you can make more awesome stories like this one
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It means a lot that you were enjoying it, and I hope so to, thank you!
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I'll always be a fan of your work
Your welcome