Something’s happened to Holder’s Boulder. It didn’t crack. It didn’t break. It…HATCHED?! The Mane Six and Spike set out on a quest to find the rare stone dragon that hatched from the famous “boulder”. Will they find it in time?
I’ve been meaning to write this for some time, and I thought that the Best Audio Drama Fanfic Contest was the perfect opportunity. Here’s the link below:
Audio Drama Fanfic Contest
However, if Born of Rock is not to your taste, please check out MissKoiFishPony’s The Mare Who Became Queen.
Chapters (4)
Oh shoot! Girls, hurry and get there quick!
Yipee! Kiddo's contest entry story is finally here!
Trying to keep it all together by gluing that huge egg shell back together again for her sanity/the family's sanity
Although, just a quick nit pick, I don't think Limestone would use the word "super-duper". That's more of a Pinkie word. But other than that, you pretty much got Limestone down
Speaking of Pinkie, I'm sooooo enjoying your portrayal of Pinkie's character so far
So realistic to the fun, not too over the top but just the right amount of zaniness to be Pinkie Pie
Wished the chapter was longer though, but again, nit pick:/ Onto the next chapter!
And you picked a really great idea for your story: Houlder's Boulder as a dragon egg
This is my headcanon too, having the Boulder not just any dragon egg, but a stone dragon egg
I was thinking of writing a story about this theory someday, but I like this version better than the one in my head
It's more of an adventure story which can bring alot more to the table than what I had in mind
Anyway, haha lol aww poor Limestone
Before I begin my review of this chapter, quick note: you don't have to advertise my story in your summary description silly
Iappreciate your kind gesture, but you already made a blog post about it, so there's not need for you to do this too
But thank you anyway kiddo
Also, in your summary description, change the word "popular" into "well-known". The reason why is because according to the new rules in the contest, the host doesn't want the authors of their stories to "force" their readers into liking their stories for the sake of the contests and such. I kinda got slapped on the hand (or hoof) by the host about how I was wording things in my story's summary description. So, in order for you not to get slapped, learned from my mistakes and avoid the "popular" word and the "please like, favorite, and follow" phrase when addressing to the readers about your story and the contest.
It was funny, progressing, and filled with fun little twists that will develop this adventure furthur
Again, Pinkie characterization is great along with the rest of the main cast of course
Great use of the Map to track the stone baby dragon down
Also, there's a song?!
And its from one of my favorite Disney movies Pete's Dragon?!
Yes!XD While this song may not be favorite from the film and certainly not as great (in my eyes), in comparison to the Passamaquaddy song, for the two business men characters (certainly not as catchy), I think its still appropriate to use this song for this story's villains
Film and Flam
It perfectly explained the Brothers plan for the entire story, and its new parody lyrics were great
Not to mention that its great to have a Pete's Dragon reference in a story
And it makes sense that Film and Flam are still interested in making money in healing and medicine since their last episode in Season 4
Though, I don't know how these two unicorns are going to take down and capture a giant stone dragon baby and be able to cut that creature up
I mean, I can imagine that this will be no easy feet, especially to cut up a creature with a hide as hard as well stone
But I'm sure that you have something in mind in order for this evil and devilish plan to work
Please yes!
Or is it just reserved for Film and Flam since they're so musical? I mean, it makes sense to just make them musical since they always sing in every episode they've appeared in. 
I honestly see your story as a fun mini audio drama series that anyone can be invested in, so good luck with the rest of your story:)
Alright, onto the review: loved this chapter!
Is this story going to be a musical?
Question I forgot to ask in the last chapter: Why didn't Limestone join the gang in finding the stone dragon baby? I mean, Houlder's Boulder was so important to her, and....well then again, Limestone feels like the safety of the rock farm and sanity of her family would be more important than trying to capture a stone dragon baby. Plus, Limestone revered the stone because of what it stood for in terms of the farm's name and ancestry, not necessarily the Boulder itself. So, never mind.
Anyway, going to blog post about your story now
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Limestone only used that word because she knew it would get through to Pinkie how important it really is.
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Thank you!
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Hmmm, ehhh maybe...at most:/ But....I don't think so, but that's just my opinion/interpretation of Limestone.
Based on the contest, you are not allowed to tell people directly to like the fic. Please take this phrase down, or consequences will be enforced. I also saw you reply to misskoifishpony, indicating you saw her say to take this down, as she learned from experience. If you don't, I'll have to be forced to have you disqualified, and I'm very sorry. So please, take that phrase down, because this fic seems to look interesting.
Other than that, I can't wait to read the story!
6966345 Thanks for letting me know!
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You're welcome, I don't want people to be disqualified.
dragon 'chick'????? Is she related to Scootaloo??????
7008065 I believe the word "chick" in this case is a name used for baby dragons.
Dawww such cute two ending chapters
That's probably my only complaint, I felt like Film and Flam would put up little bit more of a fight. Also felt like it could have been little longer story, but its still great as a short story too
But overall, a super cute and sweet and fun story
Best of luck to you in the contest!:D
Gem the stone dragon is so precious, and her relationship with Spike & Marble & Maud is soooo precious
Also love her blue eyes and her lava breath
Wow, those Film Flam brothers didn't put much of a fight did they
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Let's just say they're not the type of ponies who'd get their hooves dirty.
Yeah, I didn't really have anything else for this story besides the version it is now.
You too!
Friendly word of advice, link to that story.
7678811 Here you go: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/304033/the-mare-who-became-queen
I hope you enjoy my friend's story!