I can not wait to read more.

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I would ask the narrator to stick to his job and not break narration to have light banter with the audience but there's more chapters after this so it'll be ignored.

Sometimes it is a bit difficult to understand a description, maybe only because I should translate the few words to be sure, but I understand much from the context alone.

Well I really enjoyed this chapter, and I'm happy that they are finally meeting each other.

I have nothing to complain this time, I think I said everything and nothing was bad this time.

There needed to be a bit of a chase sequence, and then I was stumped as to how she would get away. With her condition being as it was.

I'm not sure how it works, but if she is affraid enough I guess her body would maybe ignore the pain for the moment, and well her body would work as good as body could still support her. (I mean if she would have a broken hoof, then she wouldn't be able to run that fast, feeling pain or not.)

I dunno. I mean, I'm liking the fic enough so far, but all the YouTube links and other links really feel like they detract from the story. Readers want to hear YOUR story and how YOU think a character sounded or how a circle on a carrot tree looked.

A carving like that means tools and a tool means ponies! Or at least somepony for sure! What!? Yes, I know it's confusing but officially every race be they Pony, Donkey, Griffon, or Minotaur are still somponys. Funny I know.

Always felt that was a little racist to the non-pony races.

Really slow start to... *skips to the end*... ...something.

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Its called build up ya dingus

She could feel a sharp pain in her left hind leg, and remembered Applejack hanging onto her hoof; futility trying to save her life.

"Barely a day the wilderness Rarity and you're already thinking like a cave-pony.

"It only served feed into her foul mood, resulting in an ongoing cycle.

"Sssssh, haaa... Sssssh, haaa... Sssssh- Grrrgh !" The pain in her fetlock was unbearable, as she cradled it while hissing through her teeth and exhaling out her mouth.

Ok, considering how long it took them to meet up my prediction seems unlikely now, Oh well.