• Member Since 29th Aug, 2013
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Chaos Phantasm


An on again-off again Australian FIMfiction author. I like to write stories, be they good or bad. I always have an idea in my head just waiting to be used. I love to write and will continue to do so.

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Two-hundred and thirty five years since the Mega-spell holocaust decimated Equestria, and it was only a great few years before that a horrible atrocity had sparked the inferno of war, it was that atrocity that has often times nagged at Junction Town resident ghoul and trader, Ditzy Doo.

Thirty five years following the Neighvarro incident, having read an old book on ancient Equestrian customs and culture, and with a special day fast approaching, Ditzy prepares for the week long journey to Ponyville, now a Hellhound Sanctuary, alone on a pilgrimage two centuries in waiting.


Credit for the characters and gadgets of Fallout: Equestria goes to - Kkat
Pre-read and edited by - Word Worthy
Cover Art by - shelbythehedgehog112

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

I'm not really a fan of fallout equestria.

But i did take the time to read this.

Because ditzy.

+1

*sniffs* Wow... that was... powerful... poor Ditzy... good short fanfic.

Where are the napkins?

Well, here's the review I promised... dear Luna that was hard to do :fluttercry:.

Review

The clouds opened up, and from the gap in their gray blanket came the ray of dawn’s first light, cast over a rugged land of rock and sad puddles which radiated with the sins of the past, dying slowly as years had passed on. The stars’ reach extended through the ruined skyline of Manehatten, skeletal hulks of skyscrapers slowly collapsing while armed ponies patrol their forgotten heights, preying on the weak below and in the streets where other danger lurks in this place of desolation.

Holy Shit that's a beautiful paragraph

This is beautiful. I love it when I find these hidden gems that you can just.. experience, not just read. This is one that going to be hard to forget. Faved and this is going to get a special place on my recommended list...

Which I haven't even made yet.

Even though I've never read any of Fallout: Equestria, I have to admit, this was a beautifully written piece.

Hey there!

I am doing a clean up over at the Fallout Equestria groups at the moment and saw your story. To keep things consistant in the group would we like all of the stories to start with the classical "Fallout Equestria", so its easy for our readers to see that the story actually happens in the verse. Seeing the positive comments would it be sad to remove the story over such a little thing, so I was wondering if I could convince you to add it to the title so all things look nifty in our end.

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Would it be acceptable if I were to instead re-title it: In Memory Of... A Fallout: Equestria Tale? I have no quarrels with re-titling it in the traditional manner, I feel that titling as I am asking would help to differentiate it from the bigger stories. If not, then there's no worries and I will be more than happy to re-title it as Fallout: Equestria - In Memory Of...

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Ending it with Fallout Equestria is a good way of doing it as well. We do just need that FoE in there somewhere :scootangel:

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Splendid. :yay: I have re-titled it, adding the Fallout: Equestria moniker to it. Thank you so much for letting me keep it mostly as is. :rainbowlaugh: :twilightsmile:

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Hey why become an dictator like admin if you can't break the rules a little bit =P

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By the way, you may add Fallout: Equestria - A Song of Angels to the list of discontinued Fallout: Equestria stories. I am no longer working on it and I refuse to mark it as cancelled.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/287313/fallout-equestria-a-song-of-angels

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When a story haven't been updated in over 2 years does it automaticly go into the "dead" pile. If I went looking for "hiatus" or "cancelled" would I hove stories around pretty often with how some writers change their tags more often that i change socks.

It is also already in the pile by the way

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Ah, alright then. :twilightsmile: Sorry to trouble you.

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