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Sanguine Eyes


I am the high priest of Snuggloth the dark one, I am the champion of his armies, the undisputed king of Snuggles.... fear me

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Jedi Master Shen Tsetsuhara the war sage, widely regarded as a demigod of the lightsaber. Darth Sanguine the seeker and keeper of secrets, the only Sith who could easily stand against Naga Sadow and oddly the only one who was content with a title below "Lord of the Sith"
Easily the two greatest warriors known to the galaxy during the great hyperspace war. They went missing before the bloodshed finally ended. No one knows where they went after their final battle on the republic flagship Trinitie's Breath. But yeah no one in the known galaxy is going to know what happened to them. No one will ever know their never ending conflict, their countless years of battles. No one save for one specific princess of Friendship who is not alone in her desire to end so many years of painful war. However, she may find its a LOT more complicated than just some petty hate or loyalty to one's cause.



huzzah my first one shot, this is more or less just a bit of fun and funny philosophy. Two characters I have used in other stories off site, I just wanted to bring them back into my fun filled days and see how they would do in Equestria. Sorry its so long, I just wanted to be sure I got everything in it ^_^

youtube reading by Rakkit_Brony

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Comments ( 30 )

Your one Hell of a writer mate!

6901700 well thank ya :ajsmug:
I'm surprised... it got three likes three favorites then suddenly two down votes out of nowhere... I hope no one is just randomly angry at me again...

6902002 I think you just got two picky viewers that want everything in a story to be perfect.

6902071 yeah that sounds about right. Thankfully I didn't make this to get likes. It was just a fun little project that I hoped people liked. And hey. The first three likes were followed by favorites... that's a good sign that people enjoyed it

hey man im going to be doing a fanfic reading of this on my channel https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCGfgAlFLXpikq-ncMz-vlpw if you want to listen to it. im planning on releasing it on Monday.

6904715 oh cool thanks. Lol I have been actually trying to get people to do readings of my work. Thank you VERY much. I will watch your channel for certain. Any questions you have please just ask

I was the influence for all that gnawing wasn't I?
:derpytongue2:

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Just a little bit XD

6906052
It was very nice, I like it. Its not so often I get to see your works like this.:ajsmug:
Honestly, thank you for writing this :twilightsmile:

He looked over Fluttershy who had just entered followed by Angel bunny. "Dear sweet darkness.. what is that?....so much malicious power built up inside it... its diabolical and fluffy... I love it!"

this part had me laughing for quite a while :rainbowlaugh:

6904977 hey man im srry but I have to push the release date back to next Friday instead of monday

6907847 I was going to say... lol some stuff in there might be a little hard to read out loud.the computer's name and their damaged lines
Then that half a speech in ancient sith. Imma be impressed if you can tackle it

This is a great story!

6910600 glad you liked it ^_^ I think a few people were thrown off by the title... and the comedy tag... but I'm glad you enjoyed it

awesomeness.
Rakkit_Brony did us all a favor and did a youtube reading ^_^

Haha, so funny. :rainbowlaugh: I liked reading this story and having both the Jedi and the Sith guys just be friendly rivals to each other is something really original, I dare say that this story is an enjoyable one and I do recommend it.
But, I have one nitpick: Shouldn't they be a bit more...dead? Probably about 15-25 years before meeting the Main 6? Unless they're a species that lives for more than 120 years, I find them living for 115 years a little hard to swallow. :twilightoops:

7252951 the Sith pureblood have only slightly longer lifespans than humans and in star wars they do have age slowing medical care, normally for the wealthy but basically it's just the bit where they are old as dirt and still active. Advanced medical care, the force and extremely healthy individuals... lol still, I get what you are saying, I almost had them both be just the run down type. Hobbling around, falling asleep mid battle and arguing about the beSt type of stool softener XD you know... "get off my lawn" old people stuff XD

7253092 I see. So Lord Scourge in SW:TOR is like 300-400 if he took some 'Live for a long time' stuff and the Sith Geezer is like 2/5 or 3/10 his current age. Cool, didn't know that.

7253163 well the emperor made him immortal after he betrayed Revan, there is a book on that, I have it at home. I'll grab that up and get the title for you when I get the chance

Well ok then. By the way, I've joined you now. So now you have a follower. :twilightsmile:

7253267 huzzah! Friends of awesomeness. Ill have to throw one of your characters into on of my stories here soon ^_^

7253442 lol well when I complete my current projects I am going to be doing a follower sgory, just all the characters from my stories hanging out with my followers and being silly but if you so desire, I do put the OCs of my friends into my stories quite often. Almost every wolf in King of the north is based on one of my friends and or followers

This deserves a sequel.

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Ive been thinking about it, but the overwhelming majority of downvotes on all my stories are from people who disagree with me politically and never read any of them. I am not too psyched to put more of my content up here on Fimfiction unless its a project I am already working on.

8911896
Oh okay, just ignore them.

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tempting... though it screws up my ratio, and I am very well known on other groups and sites. although, if I am to write a sequel to this one Ill let you know...

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^_^

I'm glad you liked it, but characters are all kinds of fun to write.

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