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When Rainbow Dash opened the door to see Adagio Dazzle standing there, she could have never predicted the adventure, romance, and pain that would follow.
Slow romance between Rainbow Dash and Adagio Dazzle, set in the Equestria Girls universe, with elements of adventure, slice-of-life, sadness, and comedy. Expect new chapters on a monthly basis.
Collaboration between VitalSpark and loyaltyprincess. Traditional version of cover art by Munchiezxx, redrawn by loyaltyprincess.
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Hmm...
Intriguing, if a little rushed. Still... a tale with LOTS of potential. See ya next month.
Craine...
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They might seem to have gotten together quickly, but the course of true love never runs smooth. There will be bumps along the way. This is just the first chapter. We've already written over 200,000 words — most of it is unedited so far — and they're still not properly together.
6898425 Talk is cheap. I look forward to the proof. Very much so.
Craine...
Its worth a track!
It has lot of potential, a little rushed on the feelings, yes, but a good story can make up for it.
Ill be waiting for the next chapter :)
great chapter.. a little rushy but no real harm... also im guessing either life in the way while writing or was it writers block? anways can't wait for more...
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There's actually well over 100k words already written. It needs a lot of editing though, and the story hasn't been my highest priority, languishing on a rarely used alt account, until I moved it to my main account today.
7380369 ahh thanks for letting know and Understandable... what' you main account called so i can keep on reading the story when it's moved to there...
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It's already moved. This is my main account.
7380394 oohh X3 did not know... thanks for letting me know that...
Nice chapter, Rainbow saying I love you so soon and later regretting it seems something she would do .
Waiting for next one.
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Ten seconds flat.
Nooo! Poor Dagi. WTF, Rainbow?
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Can't have everything run perfectly smoothly, can we?
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Man, there's not going smoothly and then there's bangin' one chick while you're on a date with another the day after she saved your life.
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But in fairness to Rainbow, Sunset is hot.
YAY! Update!
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I'll try to be a bit faster with the next one.
What? But she? And Dagi? But?... Why...?...and then?... How?... What???
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Plot twist!
WTF. She is changing girlfriends like socks.
Ohh so much drama and love dodecahedrons XD
I love it!
Cant wait for the next chapters ?
Is Sunset a changeling? Because i don't think Dash would leave Adagio in the middle of date and after she told Adagio she wants to be with her forever.
While this did feel a teeny bit rushed, there was a flow to it too. It felt natural and nicely written. Moreover it was nicely characterised. Added to that, Adagio & RD is a ship I haven't come across much. I rather like it.
Interesting if there was some kind of lasting brain damage, how would RD and Adagio cope with that?
I do like this fic. Will there be lasting brain damage to deal with?
Wait....what the hell?? Sunset decides she has feelings for RD and suddenly after 4 chapters of build up - that went really fast - we have RD cheating on Adagio??
Jeez...First it was Cloudy, then Adagio now Sunset...either there was some brain damage left after the bike crash or RD is the CHS bike. I wonder who'll ride her next?
Joking aside, this was super fast and almost off-putting to the point of not being able / wanting to read.
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The course of true love never runs smooth.
And just like that, I'm out of this story. I know RD is fast but 2 chapters ago RD is declaring her love for Adagio, now she's cheating on her AND saying she loves Sunset?
What the actual F***? Just...no!
Hey. Would you ever continue this story? It's wonderful.
While I do enjoy both shipping's with Rainbow..........
How the fuck did this happen?
I know you wanted drama but you did it so wrong. Even excluding you rushing this or even having the two get together in the first place there was no explanation on why. I mean, I thought Applejack and Sunset were a thing with how this was first going. Then the thing with cloud kicker, Rainbow Dash being disloyal, the fact that she was being fake, and you giving no reason why she even wanted to be her girlfriend if she's just gonna leave faster than pinkie on a cake high!!!
....
Yeah I'm just disappointed in how this was written. Sorry but you don't have my vote of faith in this story.