Day 2, Part 2: Redemption and Cuddles
“Hey, girls” Sunset called into the library where the unicorns were taking their break.
“What’s up, Sunset?” Lyra asked.
Sunset floated a polaroid camera beside her, “Would you girls mind if we took a group shot? I promised the girls back home some picture of Equestria.”
The unicorns agreed enthusiastically and gathered around Sunset as she floated the camera out to the group snapped the picture. Sunset grabbed the picture and thanked the girls and headed out to the Mirror room.
Sunset set the Mirror up and put the picture in an envelope and sent it through.
“Sunset?” Starlight’s voice called from the door.
“Oh, What’s up Starlight?” Sunset asked.
“Ah, well I was thinking after your presentation…” Starlight started, pawing at the ground nervously.
Sunset looked around awkwardly, waiting for Starlight to make her point.
Starlight sighed and just stated, “You’ve done things you regret, Right?”
Sunset was taken aback, both by the question and the incredibly blunt way of asking it.
“Um… Yes…” Sunset answered carefully, “Yes I have…”
“How do you deal with it?” Starlight asked, getting a bit more into Sunset’s face.
“Um… what?”
Starlight sighed, as she went over to the mirror.
“Everypony sort of has an Idea of what I did, but nopony knows the exact details. Despite that, everypony is still nice to me.”
Sunset snorted, “Lucky you, I had to save the School before anypony stopped hating me.”
“It feels… I don’t know… Undeserved?” Starlight said.
Sunset went over to sit next to Starlight.
“Yeah, I can see that, I sort of felt the same way with the girls back home,” Sunset explained, “I never really understood how they could’ve been so accommodating given all I did to them, but I guess that’s Friendship for you.”
“Did you… Have nightmares?” Starlight asked, staring at the floor.
“Ah… I see,” Sunset said, “Yeah, that parts rough, especially at the start. They start as memories, everything plays out exactly as it happened, and then you wake up angry at the world and especially the five girls acting as your lock and key.”
Starlight hummed, still staring at the floor.
“And then, you get to know them,” Sunset continued, looking at the mirror as if it was replaying everything she was saying, “and The dreams change. This time, you win and that’s the part the scares you.”
“I dream of wandering the remains of Equestria,” Starlight said finally, “There’s nothing but desert and sand. Then, I see him and he’s saying something….I can’t hear him but… His shocked expression makes it clear he’s asking, ‘Why?’”
“Who’s ‘He’?” Sunset asked.
Starlight hesitated a little bit. Her history was sort of embarrassing to talk about normally, adding where it all began was just a cherry on top of the humiliation sundae.
“His name is Sunburst… he was the first friend I ever had,” Starlight explained.
“Sunburst…I know the name.” Sunset said in thought.
Starlight sighed,”He went to Celestia’s School after earning his cutie mark. I never saw him again, and the rest is history. Did you know him?”
Sunset shrugged,“Like I said, The name’s familiar, but I don’t remember anything else. I was so full of myself that I didn’t bother with the little people”
“I guess that first stage was happening when I was stalking Twilight.” Starlight said, looking back at the mirror, “Of course I didn’t have anypony to reign me in…”
“It’s a journey, for sure, but I couldn’t think of better hooves you could be in” Sunset assured.
A Cough came from the room’s entrance. The unicorns looked back to see Trixie standing at the entrance.
“Ah, forgive Trixie, Moondancer was about to start her panel.”
Starlight stumbled upright, “Oh, um, Trixie! How-how--”
“No need to concern yourself, Starlight Glimmer, Trixie has had to deal with bouts of megalomania as well.”
Trixie went to sit next to the trio, “Trixie is an odd case, since the Amulet was rotting away at her sanity, but she does realize what she became.”
“So, where does that Leave us?” Starlight asked.
“We just, follow our own path,” Sunset said, “Twilight planned this weekend for us to make some friends, so let’s take her up on that offer!”
The other two unicorns nodded, and stood up to make their way to the Panel. Before, they could get anywhere, the mirror rippled as a yellow streak flew out of it and tackled Sunset.
“F-Fluttershy!?” Sunset yelled.
Indeed, the (now) yellow pegasus was there, latched on to Sunset and rubbing her head against Sunset’s chest.
“What are you doing here?” Sunset asked.
“Your fur is so soft…” Fluttershy replied, still lost in her own little world.
Trixie hummed in wonder, “Trixie didn’t know the Shy one was this… Shameless.”
Fluttershy’s eyes popped open and she turned to Trixie.
“Oh my Gosh!” Fluttershy gasped, “Trixie, You’re a pony too?”
“Wh-What?” Trixie said, “Trixie has always been--”
Trixie didn’t have the chance to finish her sentence as Fluttershy tackled Trixie and showered her in cuddles.
“What!? Unhoof Trixie!”
Fluttershy hummed contently while still cuddling Trixie. Sunset sighed and rolled her eyes. She walked up the Fluttershy and touched her shoulder.
“Flutters,” Sunset said softly, “It’s time for you to go home.”
Fluttershy whined defiantly and hugged Trixie tighter, much to the show mare’s annoyance.
“I know you want to cuddle all of us, but it’s dangerous for you to stay here.”
Fluttershy let Trixie go and turned to face Sunset, her sad, pony eyes were glistening in the crystal. Sunset was somewhat taken aback, apparently she had been in the human world so much that cute ponies were starting to affect her.
“Hey, Don’t look so sad,” Sunset said, “I promise I’ll take more pictures.”
Fluttershy continued to Stare sadly at Sunset.
“And I’ll get you a plushie.” Sunset sighed.
Fluttershy squeaked happily and hugged Sunset. She then trotted back into the mirror.
“ Sorry about that, Girls, she get’s… um… Excited with cute things.” Sunset said.
“Did she even realize she was a pony?” Starlight asked.
“Doubt it, her whole mind sort of gets clouded by cute, She’ll realize it later through.”
“Trixie has been violated,” Trixie muttered.
“Oh it wasn’t that bad.” Sunset said.
Trixie blushed as she turned her head away from the group,“The Great and Powerful Trixie is NOT used to such shows of affection.”
The others laughed at the whole situation.
“Come on,” Sunset called , “ Let’s not keep Moondancer waiting.”
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this chapter's first half killed my d'aww meter; the second half might have killed my sanity
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
This part was both adorable and hilarious. Keep it up!
7099160 I would say the same but the train holding my sanity derailed a long long time ago
That was astoundingly adorable and heartfelt. The interactions between Starlight and Sunset were really touching and I loved how you did it. Keep up the great work.
7099344 Would YOU invite your Big Brother to an All Girls Sleep over?
So I've been thinking for a while, "You know, there are a disproportionately large number of unicorn side-characters in the show.
... And then I see this in the feature box.
Awesome work, loving it.
Should have had Twilight close the book.
*THUD*
"... What was that? And why is there that weird outline pressed against the mirror?"
"Oh, Twilight knew that was going to happen. Ignore it."
Didn't see that part with Fluttershy coming.
This was another good chapter. Sunset will have to explain to Fluttershy that she met the Equestrian Trixie.
It was also interesting to read that Starlight has nightmares about the last timeline. Can't princess Luna help her?
Too cute with the cuddles!
Quick! Everypony cuddle Trixie!!
Did Fluttershy just Stare Sunset Shimmer into giving her a plushie?
I am infuriated by this chapter! Fluttershy charges in, recklessly cuddles Trixie without Trixie's consent, and then flits off after the promise of a plushie!
Where's the justice? Where's the recompense?
Clearly, this gross injustice demands an eye-for-an-eye retribution! The hunter must become the hunted! Trixie must turn the tables and cuddle Fluttershy in retaliation! For the next 4-5 chapters, if necessary. Maybe even brush her mane and coat, as a disproportionate form of retaliation that ensures she learns her lesson!
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Just wait until you've spent one of those wild donut-fueled nights out with those mares. You'll see how they earned that name.
Fluttershy cuddling Trixie was adorable.
trixie is comming back for ep 6!
7151440 Spoilers!
7164595 It was referring to the Map.
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Simple. The quote button is between SP for Spoilers, and the youtube video embedding thing, you just write whatever you want to write in the quote box between the two "boxes" that say quote and quote/ respectively.
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But I don't have a horn!7192777
7194522 I'd apologize, but in reality, I am not even remotely sorry.
7195554 (sighs) yeah, but on some level, I am: nothing personal (as I've used more then a few bad puns myself), but for some reason the humor you used just made me groan
of course, it might have to do with the fact that you tried to force it: if you have to EXPLAIN the joke, there IS no joke!!!toonbarn.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/Top-20-Scariest-Cartoon-Characters-Number-1-Joker.jpg
whoops: where did THAT come from!?7201273
That's fair.
Ah, good point. XD
7201907 congratulations this chain of comments has escalated to the 100s. Please stop spamming this thread.
This sounds like exactly the kind of fic I've been looking for. I look forward to reading it.
I love the story. Please continue
Not bad, not bat at all.
edit: this chapter is also adorable
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Amen my friend!
Fluttershy must be punished for her heinous crime!
Cuddling without consent! As bad as Booping unsuspecting Pones snoots repeatedly.
It makes me sick!
Kinda hoping she would grab all three in one big hug.