Spike wants to get Twilight something really special, but he hasn't gotten a single clue what to give. To add to the pressure, somepony thinks that Spike shouldn't put any effort in the gift search at all.
What will Spike do?
Spike wants to get Twilight something really special, but he hasn't gotten a single clue what to give. To add to the pressure, somepony thinks that Spike shouldn't put any effort in the gift search at all.
What will Spike do?
that's awesome
6888694 I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the fave.
Great story! Very heart warming too.
6888708 Thank you.
Very cute and touching. I wonder if Discord was just jealous about not being invited to the party or if he just likes to stir up trouble. I enjoyed the scene with Starlight as well. I haven't seen many folks write her as of yet and I think you did a good job writing her.
The way you wrote the characters' speech was really good.
6894604 Thanks.
6890450 I did not mention Discord attending the party or not. But that's a great analysis.
this story puts Discord in a very bad light xD
6900638 I'm sorry.
6894736
Thank you. It was just a thought, considering how jealous he can be.
7836675 wow, Your comment was extremely helpful and informative. I will work on rewriting the ending.
Thank you so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it.
I'm not very good at endings if I'm honest really