Oh Applejack, where for art thou Applejack! Those were words Sunset thought she'd never have to hear herself say. Though there is a first time for everything. Because they were both failing drama class, they were chosen as Romeo and Juliet for the senior play. And neither of them seem to be happy about it.
Elizabethan, not Victorian. Also, there's some weird formatting in the middle of the chapter.
Otherwise, fun story. Looking forward to more!
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Thanks! I fixed the weird format. Thanks for the heads up!
Never says anything about how long the kiss will be.
I was just reading a little bit of this and I stumbled on this line.
Victoria wasn't the queen when Shakespeare wrote Romeo & Juliet. Elizabeth the First was, so that should be Elizabethan.
Also, while I haven't finished reading, I couldn't help but spot this as I scrolled down to the comments section:
This and two other paragraphs below it have Heading 1 tags around them, and a horizontal line underneath too. You need to fix that.
Ah, this brings back memories of high school literature and drama classes. But in addition to the emotionless readings, we also had one guy who like to deliver his lines with as much impact as possible - literally yelling his lines in somebody else's face at some parts!
Poor Sunset. Poor Applejack. But I can't wait to see how this story turns out!
Who’s the other half of the art club?
This should be an actual episode
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Thats so weird i dont know why its doing that
Oh! I can't wait for the next chapter! I've never been much of an AppleSet shipper, but after this, I might be! XD
Really well written btw, love your work!
pinkie needs an intervention lol
. In hindsight it really is weird that that was considered more puritan than letting women act in theater.
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Good old irony.
Not an AppleSet fan, but this does look intriguing and funny 😆.
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
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She should have been a Mechanical.
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We have an old saying at home; "it’s not gay to give a blowjob to a friend."
I feel the need to point out that the protagonists were 14. Maybe 15. They were idiots.
And that's just the idea.
Acknowledging it really doesn't make it any better.
They were 14, their plan was full of more holes than swiss cheese and oh yeah, THEY WERE IMPULSIVE MORONS.
Precisely.
*sigh* I'd tell you if I knew, Rainbow.
*snicker*
love the story cant wait until the next chapter and also great job
This ought to be fun. Tracked!
Good job, sunset, you figured out the meaning of the play.
When he's not in school?
Happy Trixie is adorable
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA! I love Rainbow Dash.
You know, it’s strangely appropriate that you made Steven Magnet the drama teacher. Wonder if we might actually see that in the EQG shorts or the next movie, if they make another one.
No, Fluttershy is secretly a Brony.
Whoo! Well done! Any time anyone can add Shakespeare to fanfiction is okay by me.
I really love that flutterdash reference
Who are you calling sugar crazed? I'm actually immune to sugar
And I suddenly imagine a coffee mug with the Dazzlings band logo on it, since no true lady of refinment would ever stoop to petty displays of superiority (and the red gemstone shards on the transparent base certainly were never part of a magic necklace)..
Love is something most people would possibly never want to lose, and it will always hurt when they're gone, which is exactly what my family has faced 3 times in the last 2 years with losses of members of my family we cared about. And the pain most times will never go away.
Well at least we know he's not upset with his choice.
They're completely different pinkie.
Yeah, I think rainbow is correct on that one. 😑
Huh, guess she really does have a crush on applejack. 😏
God damn it pinkie!
Well, they're screwed. 😓
Your question is as good as mine applejack. 😒
Ouch!
There's a thing called walking you know.
Congratulations you two!