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Harbinger Of Mist


I am the Harbinger of Mist. Lower life forms asphyxiate in my wake. I specialize in comedy.

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You have a normal life. You're just like any other filly: You're happy, you have everything you need, you have a family and friends who love you. How could it get any better?

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Huh. That was actually pretty enjoyable. I'd recommend working on your rhythm a little bit and some rhymes were a bit confusing at first, but this was fresh and interesting. Good work.

7605163 Thanks. That means a lot coming from you. :twilightsmile:

I was really hoping if that twist at the end was as effective as I had hoped.

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