• Member Since 17th Apr, 2012
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Just a guy who likes to draw and recently found a new passion in writing stories of his OC in his adventures with Pinkamena.


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Does Thunder Hooves have any relation to the buffalo of the same name?

Holy ...! :pinkiegasp:
I just noticed now! I completely forgot!
I better make a new name then!

And no, there is NO relation to the buffalo tribe.
Thank you for noticing! Really appreciated! :twilightsheepish:

7224928 Why? :rainbowhuh:

Stories taking place in a futuristic setting or with advanced technology. Dealing with topics such as alien life, space travel, time travel, parallel universes, etc. Stories of this genre generally explore what a world could be like when such things are possible within the realm of science."

With all respect, but...
I don't see aliens, time travel or lasers in my fic... :applejackunsure:
But thank you for making me check! :twilightblush: The tags helped me in putting the other missing tags in my fics.

Much, much better now.
I would advise to cut down on ellipses ("...") as well, it's in at least two out of every three sentences. Makes all dialogue read the same.

7239427 In all chapters, or in the future?
And thank you for the review from before.

I only read (or rather skimmed) the prologue, so I don't know about all the chapter, but judging even by your posts, it's a chronic thing.

7240160 I erased some of them in the first chapter, and in further chapters, they get less common

7242213 Hey there.
Thank you very much for the comment. I loveseeing people reading my work and they are enjoying. :pinkiehappy:
Have you been following the story? :pinkiegasp:

7242221 I'll be very thankful then! :twilightsmile:
Allow me to tell something then. The start might seem slow, but every chapter is a key for the story and It's progress.
And every chapter, my writing skills get better (I think), and trying to make things more pleasing to read, but caution to not make a boring wall of text with boring descriptions. :twilightsheepish:

In the mean time, I'm hearing scary stories narrations on youtube to further my story telling levels. :derpytongue2:

7242259 Well depends. :rainbowhuh:
Because not only I'm too attached to keep updating my FIC constantly over the night with a new chapter, thinking in what is gonna happen next. And I'm also on the finals, and in some days I'm gonna do my second try on a unit I failed and right then I must start preparing myself for the finals. :facehoof:

And about your fic, what can I say. I don't mean any offense, but I'm too attached to my own world of MLP, and looking into a different alternate universe fic would confuse me a lot. :rainbowderp:

Sorry to disappoint you :fluttershysad:, but the least I can do is if you send me the link and I'll give a read and then I'll give my opinion.

PS: In my case, I'm doing this all alone. I don't have any editor or any help besides a review from a member that helped me a lot and edit my whole fic for english orthography by myself,I don't even know if I'm doing a good job. I would say, if you don't mind, try read some actual books or do like me, and hear story narrations on youtube and let It teach you forms of story telling. Seriously, It's very pleasing when things turnout good when done by yourself.:pinkiesad2:

7243432 Thank you,and I wish you good luck.

7243555 haha! Thats true somewhat. ^^
But hey, if you need help with a review, PM me and I'll answer when i can and help how i can

I am now imagining a version of this - 'Stollen Technology'. Pinkie Pie seals advanced cake technology from the germans.

Would make a good comedy. :rainbowlaugh:
You've read the fic? :)

Alright, many thanks for the "favorite"! :D

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