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Death Pony


When nopony ever seems to die, what does an out of work reaper do? He writes stories I guess.


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Sometimes it's better to be judged by your actions rather than what you are; even if what you are is something never seen before.

But will actions be enough to overcome the fear of the unknown?

Transported to an unknown world for unknown reasons, one man will try to survive long enough to figure out if his lot in life has actually improved or if he was dealt another poor hand in the great game of life.

And considering where he came from, that would be saying a lot.

Featured on Jan 20th 2017. Thanks!

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 72 )

What is this a crossover of? Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story? Will she be reaching Unstoppable Rage levels of anger? Will she be giving out any No Holds Barred Beatdowns?

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Stay tuned for these answers and more!

Pretty good. One niggle, though: Unless youre making it a character trait (hes been alone for so long he talks to himself, something like that) having somebody talk to themselves like that is kinda.... well, dumb. Should've kept it as "Pegasi?" or something to that notion, and then have the rest internal.

"Hornless" is that code for something else? Because they make pills for that.

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I see you picked up on that. Let's just say, he's been emotionally alone for long enough to be his own best friend.

Moaar :flutterrage: , I really liked this story =D, i'm anxious to the next chapters :twilightsheepish:

6878492
Excellent! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the story so far.

You need to make more! I really did like it.

6879427
Glad to hear it. There is more to come.

Hornless! Hornless! Anon is small Ronso!

...yes, I just came in here just to make a Final Fantasy 10 joke. No, I don't even know, either. The actual chapter isn't looking bad, though. Bit short to say much of anything about, but the writing is solid. Just be careful not to overdo the whole "dark, brooding stranger" shtick. It's a bad cliché for a reason.

6879611
Hm, I wouldn't call him 'dark and brooding' as much as 'lost, confused, lonely, and maybe a little scared'.

Glad you like it so far.

6879627
It's mostly just that first paragraph, but it may kind of leave a bit of the wrong impression in that sense. I've seen stories start with that kind of thing and then just kinda never stop again. It's probably just that the rest of it was so short and didn't give it a whole lot of room to establish much about its tone otherwise, though.

Too short chapters, hard to get immersed so far.
I'll give it another look at a later date.

I'm liking it so far. I'll be following.

6881684
No problem. Hopefully when you come back there will be substantial reading material to hold your interest!

is this a crossover? if so, with what?

6882103
I've already hinted at it in the second chapter, and it should be obvious by chapter three. Stay tuned.

>>Death Pony

oh okay thank you. just to clear it up for me, is the guy a human or something else?

So far so good.

Too short for me to rate it though.... (I wait until 10,000 words or complete, whichever happens first).

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Glad you like it so far!

Also, I ashamedly admit the main character is not carrying a towel around with him. :ajsleepy:

Interesting, This has potential

I like it so far. Lets see where this gos.

I find myself interested. Please, do continue. :moustache:

So what is this a crossover with?

6888434
The Fallout universe.

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Thanks. I liked Dead Money quite a bit, since I noticed you have a Ghost Person as your avatar.

6888978 Same, Old World Blues has to be my favorite though, Dead Money an extremely close second. I didn't rightly know this was a Fallout crossover until then.

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Definitely agree that Old World Blues was the best. You'll probably notice that 'Doc' is rather familiar in the next chapter. :moustache:

6889751 Zzz the foot bone's connected to the leg bone, the leg bone's connected to the purple bone.

I have to say: I've been enjoying myself reading this so far. No noticable errors in the first read through this far, so you've already got a boost in quality than most I've read... This story is intriguing, and I will enjoy reading future content.:twilightsmile:

I shall look forward, indeed...

Another good storie i found today good luck on making the next chapter

As soon as I saw Auto-Doc, I said, "Yes! Fallout, I don't even care if he's from the pre-war and pre-wasteland part of the Fallout universe, I don't even mind him having no Pip-boy, he's going to be awesome!" You've earned a Fave and a Like!

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Excellent. I think you'll like this story just fine then!

What happened to the last bagel I had saved?

I got it! All the bagels are mines:pinkiecrazy:

This is pretty good!:pinkiesmile:

7021127
Thanks! Hope you enjoy the rest...as soon as I get time to write it. :fluttercry:

7021489 I said it once...I'll say it again...take as much time as you need

This is a really good story in looking forward to the next chapter!!! Also was this crossovered with a little fallout tech? If so awesome! !

“Now, normally I’d just use some stimpaks to speed along recovery."

Stimpacks.... Fallout universe maybe? Sorry if I sound stupid that if I just figured that out. :twilightsheepish:

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No need to apologize. I was obfuscating it a little on purpose at first but yes, it is a crossover with the Fallout universe.

Any hope of an update any time soon?

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First off, thanks for the interest in the story. To be honest, I'm the type of writer that needs peace and quiet to sit down and make words appear on screen, but sadly things have been really busy between work and my social life, so I've been away from the keyboard for a while now. It is my hope that things will calm down soon, both for my stories and my sanity. I've started another chapter to a story, but it needs some more work before I publish it.

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