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KingJoltik


"No matter how many friends you do lose...you can always make more." - Michael J. Caboose

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Celestia had just declared that Sunset Shimmer is no longer her student. In retribution, Sunset tried to use the mirror to find a new destiny. Instead, she somehow ended up at the Crystal Empire a thousand years ago. Turns out, it just might be what she's really looking for.

Note: Characters shown in story are based on mlp comic fiendship is magic #1! Also, this is a crackship fic of SunsetXSombra.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

Oh Boy, I hope that Sunset at least finds out not only is she in the past but that when Sombra turns into the Evil King Sombra that she tries to figure out how to return to her time so she doesn't end up sealed away like how Sombra did, I don't think that Sunset would want to be a living smoke cloud like Sombra became one.

7217600 You're jumping a bit ahead there my friend. There's a bit of story to tell before Sombra becomes king. After all, he's still a colt in this and Sunset's young too.

7218230 True, but you did have Sunset see herself and Sombra as King and Queen, but shouldn't it be Emperor and Empress since that place is called the "Crystal Empire", also Sunset didn't see herself as an Alicorn, too bad I always thought she would look good with a set of wings on her back.

7218356 Well, it was there to give her motivation to a new goal. Otherwise, her goals wouldn't make sense in the story that I'm setting up here. Remember, she thought going through the mirror would give her something else.

As for the titles...I think King and Queen work better. Sorry.

Okay... This story sounds a bit... Odd, but let's give it a try.

7223908 It's not a usual idea. That's why I tried to make it.

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I forgot this was a thing...I can't remember what I was going to do with the story....I do know I couldn't figure out what happens next, and I do know the ending.

Wow...that was a long time ago...

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Yeah. Most people do not like Radiant Hope. I actually like the character, especially the first comic she came from. She's a great character with Sombra.

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Why thank you. Nice to meet you too.

Please tell me this is being continued, cause the idea is really good, can't believe no one else has thought to do it yet...

I've just noticed you haven't posted a chapter since 2017... I'm guessing you aren't writing anymore, are doing it on another site, or have been very busy and have to many stories to update all at once...

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