The Doctor is at it again, saving lives and running away. In fact mostly running away. However this time he has to deal with it all with a brand new body in a world he doesn't know.
Mysterious events are occurring as several ponies have gone missing, their homes left abandoned and in states which seem like they haven't been lived in in a long time. Can the Doctor do this without bringing destruction to the sleepy town he has landed in.
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Very well done. You must have an awesome proof reader.
722537
Yes thanks for that proof reading :D
very nice writing, i think i might read this one for youtube
726289
Wouldnt mind adapting it for play on youtube.
But if you do read it do post it. :D
Also thanks for the kind words, wish it will get feature as I add chapters.
As for now it sounds really interesting and I can't await the rest of it
727104
Cheers chapter 3 is in the works, and you can check out my other stories as well :D
727141I'll do that as soon as possible
I can't await the moment the Doctor sees his new regenerated body 
This is actually pretty amusing, I'm looking forward to seeing more of your Doctor.
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Pinkie's not fourth wall breaking in this, is she? I can't remember if she has already in previous chapters. I don't mind her doing it in humorous/silly stories, but in fics like this I prefer her not too. It just sorta ruins the whole story for me.
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nope, her understanding of the Doctors name is nothing to do with 4th wall breaking, rather it is a paradoxical cause of time travel, imagine river song from the Doctor. She knew him before he knew her.
741318 Ah, good.
743223
Does mean I have to have a meeting of them later on.
And once again the Incarnation of Madness proves her powers...
Can't wait for next one! Allons-y!
First!
Great story, the best Dr Who crossover I've read yet, very on par with the Doctors personality. Big fan of Dr. Who and MLP keep up the good work!
Allons-y!
I didn't spot too many errors, but the fact that you posted it knowing that there were still errors to fix so you can rush off to write the others stories you like better... it could just be me, but its sorta like you're saying you don't care all that much about this story's fans. I find it insulting. A bit.
774634
This chapter has been finished for a while, and My regular Pre-reader, has been busy. Ive waited for them but I didn't see the point of keeping it for any longer. I do care about this story, but I find Artemis and Soarin's Pie more fun to write because of a certain challenge that I get from them. Trying to write a good HiE is hard, as is writing a good Shipfic, where as Doctor who is easier for me, since I love watching it. You will get story updates and I will make sure they are decent, but I don't see the point waiting for 2 weeks to get a chapter out if I have it written.
777923 I suppose that's fair.
Which Doctor did he regenerate from? Is 12?
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Matt Smith
Ok.
777923 I'm sorry...
807755
no need to apologise to me. :D not your fault I have bad grammar.
hi good start on a doctor in equestria story a clichie thime but who am i to say im righting one now. warning i can offer some advice to help you whair i am failing: one: how did the TARDIS get damaged?; two: did Dash drag the doctor to the library? explane that more; three longer chaptors sorry but five houndered words just isnt going to cut it. im not trying to be mean: i dont do that but all these thing+more (bad speeling) have gottan me lots of hate. whair did you get Dash sleeping on a cloud? i could have sworn she was in my fic
never shoot a time lord while their regenerating and is this another attempt to make a Time Machine? its been done before with simuler evidence: Tardis running away, ponies going missing, odd stuff going on at home-including a nonexistant second floor.