Scootaloo feels discouraged about her lack of flying abilities, and Rainbow Dash has her final Wonderbolts exam coming up. Both Pegasus ponies could learn a lot from each other about what it truly means to soar.
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PonyThunder
Author of mostly cute/funny one-shots and a handful of heartwarming stories. I also make art! https://www.deviantart.com/doodledonutart
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This is really coming along, keep up the good work!
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Thanks, I'm a bit unsure of where to take things at the moment though. I had a rough plan before I started this but I've deviated a little bit.
Awww, they're so cute together.
That was a good story, I really enjoyed it.
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Thanks.
It was kind of a test to see how to write fanfiction for this show. I've written fanfiction before but on things that had less defined universes and main characters, so it was a bit of a change trying to keep them in character the best I can.
Thanks for reading!
6895892 Definitely, hope to see more from you in the future!
There's a lot to like in this. I wouldn't mind if everything was more developed but it wasn't bad.
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I has to look up "lime" in regards to fanfiction.
I disagree, I thought I was just conveying sisterly love. That's all I was going for.
6896285 sorry, typing on a tablet leads to typos. I edited the comment.
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LOL.
That makes much more sense xD
Talk about a critical typo.
While this was still good upon a reread, I can't help but feel it would have been improved slightly with an epilogue about RD and Spitfire talking now that Scoots could fly.
That's really more of a nitpick than any real issue, though.
8092567 Certainly! This was the first fimfic I wrote. I should write another Scootaloo/RainbowDash fic sometime.