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While enjoying a quiet afternoon in her cottage Fluttershy is suddenly surprised by Pinkie Pie, alongside her sister Marble Pie. Marble is visiting Ponyville, but because Pinkie is busy on that day she decides to leave her sister in the hooves of Fluttershy for the afternoon. As the two of them are alone, the shy mares begin to talk to each other.

Well, sort of.

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.... Awwww....

They were speaking Quietese.

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Nice story

Nice and well written.

I suspect Marble Pie is secretly Fluttershy's clever alter-ego!

Nice story!

I get the feeling they sat there for the whole afternoon. Well at least they weren't lonely...

Pinkie Pie - Force of nature. Still, if a glance could equal a thousand words, they spent the entire day gossiping about Big Mac's flank and giggling like schoolfillies about him.

I gotta admit, I was hoping for fs to have something more meaningful to say to someone so much like her old self...

I love it! Now going to find Marbleshy ships.... thank you kind sir!

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Did you find any? :trixieshiftright:

Fluttershy opened her mouth, but then quickly sealed her lips. She looked aside, hiding even more of her face behind her hair. In quick succession she cast short glances over to the grey pony, but just as quickly turned her eyes away again. After a while she lowered her gaze to her seat, scratching with one of her hooves on it. With her hair still covering most of her face Fluttershy eventually looked up to Marble again, and put on a nervous smile. “Um, hi.”

Marble almost jumped as if someone had shouted into her ear, despite Fluttershy having spoken in a very quiet, delicate voice. Her uncovered eye was staring at the Pegasus, wide in shock and fear. Marble looked left and right, then back at Fluttershy. Quickly she lowered her head again, averting Fluttershy’s gaze while her cheeks turned pink. Underneath her body her hooves were trembling slightly. She then seemed to calm down a little, looking back up at the still smiling Fluttershy. “Mh-hm” she hummed, returning a slightly forced smile.

Then, both of them blushed and silently averted each other’s eyes again.

Oh yeah, these two will get along just fine:ajsmug:.

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