Spike the Dragon, brother of Lieutenant Shining Armor, arrives in Ponyville to oversee the Summer Sun Celebration. The reasons why he stays are far, far more complicated, and they all involve madness. Both new, and very old.
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it's pretty good, and had some interesting choices, even though I'm not too fond of the Fluttershy one
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Thanks for the comment! First comment on my first story, this is nifty.
So far, I feel that I've been weakest on Fluttershy, Rarity, and Applejack; that should change when I get part two up next week, so hopefully that'll make up for it somewhat!
Liked the divergence so far. Not every story gets older Spike done plausibly, especially those that swap his role with Twilight's.
The ending... makes me tense up.
The ominous presence is strong in this story. Though the whole Luna-and-Twilight kerfuffle will need more details to be understood - as of right now, it's terribly obscure. Hopefully that was the intention.
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It was by design! Not that I'm going to be leaving it that way.
It's going to take a while to get there though because dammit I overplotted again.