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Rainbow Dash is accepted into the Wonderbolts, but after an accident lands Scootaloo in hospital indefinitely, will Rainbow Dash be able to move on and follow her dreams?

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Lots of tiny errors in writing. But I liked the story, have a thumb!:ajsmug:

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I've prepared myself. Onward, TO THE STORY!

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Huh. That was really nice. I expected something trollish due to the long title, but that was not bad. A few grammar mistakes but only a little. I enjoyed it. Thumbs up for you.

At the begining I was like: :yay:

Then toward the middle I was like::rainbowderp:

At the fire I was like::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry:

But then at the end I was like::yay:

Nice story, but I thought comas were not caused by immense shock………

i cried so much that this made me realize that i have been really bitchy with my sis so this made me more nice with her thx soo much and nice story i like how you related rd and scoots as sisters cute story here are my emotion faces to the fic. :pinkiesmile::fluttershysad::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::twilightsmile:

I enjoyed this story a lot. A lot of stories like this always seems to end with Scootaloo being dead, and I'm glad the same didn't happen here. I like stories especially ones that don't end sad. Giving a sad story a happy ending gives that satisfying contrasts. All in all a wonderful story.

ngh the feels, but it was still good, even with a few errors

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