• Member Since 2nd Dec, 2011
  • offline last seen Feb 1st, 2014

LunarShadow


Hope you enjoy some writing.

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When the peace talks take a turn for the worst, the pony simply known as the General is thrust into an adventure beyond his wildest dreams. Not all is as it seems in the war between his ruler, Princess Luna and his enemy, the Solar Empire.

After the peace talks dissolve, Captain Clear Skies is forced to make a run for the river. Her task will now be to get some important information back to Princess Celestia... If she can survive.

Chapters (5)
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Hey, thanks for taking the time to read this. I hope you enjoyed what you've seen so far and I hope you will come back for future chapters.

My biggest concern right now is my take on military rankings. If you know I have a rank wrong or too low for a given situation, by all means, feel free to send me a message and I'll fix it A.S.A.P.

*Edit* I hope to update roughly once a week. Want to voice your opinion on which character I should update next? Send me a pm and let your voice be heard.

One of the best war!fics I've ever read! Continue, please!
For the Lunar Republic!!! *hoofpump*:heart:

It's a good story from what I've read so far. I think I saw some comma errors, but I'm not the best at comma's myself. Overall though it's a very good start to a story. Interesting to see where it goes.


This was the only comma error that caused me real problems while reading it.
grand, oak doors to the grand hall --> grand oaks doors to the grand hall.

Not bad. Interesting concept. That is all.

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