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Penn Hooven


Writer and fanfiction reviewer. Feel free to say hi.

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Octavia, eldest and most responsible of her two sisters, decides that for this summer she wasn't going to watch Derpy and Vinyl lay around playing video games and eating muffins all day. No, it was time they grew up a little, and experienced the rewards of having a job. Unfortunately, her sisters can't do anything without making a mess of it.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

6855652 Thank you kindly, and thank you for commenting. I don't get much feed back round here.

6855699 agreed. I just wish I could get a bit more feed back, but I work with what I got.

Not too shabby. Aside from the previously mentioned spelling errors I found this story quite enjoyable. I'd actually be interested in seeing more of it. I think it'd be pretty funny to see what antics they get up to.

6863454 Well thank you. I actually am going to put up a revised version soon. Something that has a little bit meat on the bones, if you will, and flush out more of the sister relationship between the girls. I hope you'll give that a look when it comes out, because it may feel like a new story.

I really enjoyed this story, though I had to keep reminding myself it was set in EQG universe rather than MLP. I love the idea of them all being sisters.

I feel bad for Octivia,

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8013987 Wow. After reading your short review I have to say that I"m surprised that out of all my stories, this one is the one that actually got a review, and a highly praised one at that.

Thank you very much.

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