Esther, Es by her friends, is your average fourteen year old girl. She was having a bad day when *poof* she was in Equestria with no known way to get home.
Marked teen for mentions in some chapters.
Marked human for the first chapter.
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This could be interesting. Crystal Empire is one of my fav episodes as it was when Spike got to shine.
This has some good potential, just remember to proofread as I saw a few spelling errors:
YUUUUUSSSSS!! This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
6866701 it's almost done next chapter is
6866705 YAY!!
I'm liking the story so far.
YUUUUS! THIS IS GREAT11
6878876 :3
Hold up; You're just gonna let the fact that you shipped Twilight with Discord slide?
-would be my reaction
6889905 I should have added that!
6890406 lol
You appear to be missing the part where she tells the elements Where she is from. Good story anyway. Could use more detail here and there, but I am too picky about the quality of a story.
WHO IS KENT?!?! MUST KNOW!!!!!!
Enjoying it so far, but things seem a little all over the place:
Bored of home-schooling, falls off her bed, wakes up in Equestria where she finds Sombra has a crush on her and has got her loads of things to make her happy. Twilight turns up to 'rescue' her.
MASSIVE GAP! WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN THEN AND THE NEXT CHAPTER?!?! CONFUSED!!!!
Everyone's completely fine with her being from another world, they find out that she can sing pretty well, and she's suddenly singing at the gala.
Then for some reason Sombra sends her crush from Earth to Equestria too, even though he is trying to charm her himself.
I'm sorry, but I've just gotta ask, WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?!?!
Still enjoying it though.
7210701 you are one of the many reasons I love writing
As for the gap, just wait! I have plans for the gap to be answered!
...Mentions of what?
7212926 you will have to wait and see
I think you mean "Ma'am, I'm afraid I cannot do anything to help you"
7269496 i blame the tablet!