A story about a lost pony called Floppy and how her life ties with the main six. Can she get over her emotional and tragic past and learn to take friendship or will she suffer in her own self doubt forever?
6858487 errr thank you. I appreciate the comment although it is worrying. Yes I know the second chapter is pretty terrible but I hope to improve on the next chapter as that is where things are actually not based on any episode. I guess what I am saying is the first 2 chapters are a practice run before I get to the nitty gritty but I do need them as they develop the character and show what is relevant within this story from the original show and what isn't. I hope people can understand. Once I write the 3rd chapter I would love to hear people's opinion on it and if you think it is better done from that point then I will try to think of a way of building the beginning a different way.
My comment wasn't meant as a criticism of your actual writing, which could admittedly use some work. Rather, I was referring to this being another OC-joins-the-main-characters story. They rarely turn out well, and one in particular is close to one-million words of wish-fulfilling awfulness. Your story could be the greatest story in the world and it's still going to get flak from people just because of the subject matter, I guess is my point.
6858656 thank you for clearing that up but I understand it wasn't to do with my story. I didn't think it was and sorry if it sounded like I was offended or something. Yes, you do have a point and I understood that before I posted it. I wanted to tackle a clique idea and see if I could improve it and morph it into something great. If I fail then that is just par for the course. It's OK I will take the blame. I'd rather be different and be unpopular than be the same and popular :3
Ooo, baby, apparently this is happening. Author, I wish you luck, because you are most certainly going to need it.
6858487 errr thank you. I appreciate the comment although it is worrying. Yes I know the second chapter is pretty terrible but I hope to improve on the next chapter as that is where things are actually not based on any episode. I guess what I am saying is the first 2 chapters are a practice run before I get to the nitty gritty but I do need them as they develop the character and show what is relevant within this story from the original show and what isn't. I hope people can understand. Once I write the 3rd chapter I would love to hear people's opinion on it and if you think it is better done from that point then I will try to think of a way of building the beginning a different way.
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My comment wasn't meant as a criticism of your actual writing, which could admittedly use some work. Rather, I was referring to this being another OC-joins-the-main-characters story. They rarely turn out well, and one in particular is close to one-million words of wish-fulfilling awfulness. Your story could be the greatest story in the world and it's still going to get flak from people just because of the subject matter, I guess is my point.
6858656 thank you for clearing that up but I understand it wasn't to do with my story. I didn't think it was and sorry if it sounded like I was offended or something. Yes, you do have a point and I understood that before I posted it. I wanted to tackle a clique idea and see if I could improve it and morph it into something great. If I fail then that is just par for the course. It's OK I will take the blame. I'd rather be different and be unpopular than be the same and popular :3