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EmberLight


I'm a human, I think. Maybe.

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Fyre Web, a young earth pony colt that lives in the deepest, darkest part of the everfree forest, which is in fact much larger than you'd think, lives all on his own, and has for seven years, ever since something terrible happened to everyone else who lived there.

Then, one special day- fate is kind, and gives him some company in the form of a mysterious pink pegasus filly. Soon enough the pink filly and him become friends.

However, at this same time, something else awakens in the forest... Something dark... Something misunderstood... And something deadly.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 9 )

I like where this story is going. Can't wait to read more.

Comment posted by EmberLight deleted Jul 28th, 2016

Yes! Finally! What happened? This was a good story!

"You see the ivy on the walls?" I asked, She nodded her head. "It grows in caves and dark areas, and glows whenever something moves near it."

Genius! Motion sensor ivy! If only that existed in real life! Also, good job! I will admit, it wasn't the best introduction to Shimmering Cloud, but it could have been a lot worse.

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Thanks for the support on the story!

This was a good chapter! If only some of these things existed in real life!

However, at this same time, something else awakens in the forest... Something dark... Something misunderstood... And something deadly.

Let me guess: It's a human.

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...No, but good guess! There are a few hints throughout the last few chapters though- try to piece it together if you like.

All Chapters have been resubmitted!

I don't intend to continue working on this anytime soon, but I figured it would be rude to just leave these chapters in limbo.

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