• Member Since 22nd Sep, 2013
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Hopeful Soul

I'm just some 28-year old dude from Canada hoping to become a screenplay writer one day. That's all.


While on a walk, Twilight finds herself once again blocked by a swarm of bees defending their hive. She attempts to use a spell to get rid of them but things quickly go south...

Cover art done by Allusionist

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 18 )

Could be worse.

6845542 Spike in a secret romantic date?

Jasper, no! Leave her alone!

NintendoCapriSun: A BEE?!

She could have just teleported in the first place.:duck:

Would you like some cover art for this? I'd be willing to do one for you.

7272100 That would be awesome, though I kind of have Allusionist already working on it, sorry... I appreciate the offer though, I really do.

7272145 Okay! No problem! :D

7272306 Hehe, yes, yes I did...it was pretty funny XD

7272315 Your Welcome, keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

This was a very funny and interesting read. All it needs is just a few grammatical and punctuation fixer-uppers.

Poor Twilight. I feel so bad for her. But, at least Pinkie Pie stepped right in and came to her rescue.

If I may ask,

How did this story come to be?

What gave you the idea and inspiration to write it?

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