While on a walk, Twilight finds herself once again blocked by a swarm of bees defending their hive. She attempts to use a spell to get rid of them but things quickly go south...
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Hopeful Soul
I'm just some 28-year old dude from Canada hoping to become a screenplay writer one day. That's all.
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THE BEEES!!
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That ending though
Could be worse.
6845525 How?
6845542 Spike in a secret romantic date?
Jasper, no! Leave her alone!
NintendoCapriSun: A BEE?!
She could have just teleported in the first place.
Would you like some cover art for this? I'd be willing to do one for you.
7272100 That would be awesome, though I kind of have Allusionist already working on it, sorry... I appreciate the offer though, I really do.
7272145 Okay! No problem! :D
7272196 liked the fic?
7272306 Hehe, yes, yes I did...it was pretty funny XD
7272309 thanks :)
7272315 Your Welcome, keep up the good work!
7272371 Will do
This was a very funny and interesting read. All it needs is just a few grammatical and punctuation fixer-uppers.
Poor Twilight. I feel so bad for her. But, at least Pinkie Pie stepped right in and came to her rescue.
If I may ask,
How did this story come to be?
What gave you the idea and inspiration to write it?