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There something that is bothering me about this, Fluttershy seems kinda...out of character, i don't like the fact she sees him as some kind of pet or something, i would rather him be an equal to her.
This is really funny and interesting
love the fact he being treated like a pet
718651 Yeah, its been awhile since I had written anything so I'm a bit off. Constantly finding things I can fix, and that's one of my biggest problems is keeping Fluttershy herself, but also having this other side. I'm thinking more interaction with other characters will show how she is normal to everyone else, but you.
It's difficult when everything is only between two people right now.
My point behind this is a stab at how we as humans naturally see every other animal and/or race, even within our own species, are seemingly 'below' us, as inferior, and I apply this to the ponies in
Equestria.
If it makes you feel better, deep down she sees him as that, an equal, but also sees his vulnerability, and is using this to strengthen him to make it out in his own. She cares for him genuinly and isn't trying to hurt him, only protect him with 'tough' love that the other ponies tried to teach to her, though she may have taken things a tad overboard (again).
But thank you for taking the time to read this
719144 Thank you, I'm glad to see someone enjoy my work
Liked and faved!
Looking forward to more.
Loved it and can't wait for more. Is the fic hidden though, because I can't find it from browsing or searching.
720717Yes, it is hidden because of the Mature rating, just make sure to check the box allowing you to see Mature material and you'll be able to find it.
720902
I do. I can see other adult stories, just not yours. I only got here originally from the link on clopfic. Your story page shows nothing either.
720911 Ah, I didnt submit this, thats why. Now just gotta await for approval.
Sorry, still new to this site and how it works
I've liked it, faved it, now I gotta read it! XD Like a sir!
Didn't realize this had a mature rating until Fluttershy had a collar.
i really enjoyed this story
can wait for more of this crazy adventure 
Genius!!!
Cheerily. "Cheerilee".
That is all. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png
It seems to be a counter world compared to the original.
Fluttershy more aggressive.
Applejack acting more sophisticated.
Rarity being the truly dirty one.
Rainbow Dash being the Sensitive one.
Twilight Sparkle being more impulsive.
Pinkie Pie will (should make her the more helpful one seeing the opposite would be killing everyone).
this is a GREAT story and i say it is the best i have ever read
BUT i want you to tell me if he is realy in a dream or not because that would SUCK!but i dont think he is but i just want to be sure
722906 Thanks, I wrote these, and edited them, at 1:30AM so there was bound to be something
723275 No worries mate. I enjoy this. I guess it's because I like to see what the fans can manipulate. :3
723180 No, he's not dreaming, he only thinks so because going from a life that's been nothing but getting worse and worse, doing nothing at all, to all of a sudden being the center of attention to a certain pegasus is a little hard to adjust to, especially under these circumstances.
723543OH THANK GOD p.s. im loveing the story so far
and i think you started the calling him the pet thing because you cant put a name for a character if your putting them in the perspective of second person
your faithful reader pooch56
see the refrance i used there ^_^
723631 I did see what you did there
That's a good reason to call him pet, but actually, I originally planned second person, to create a sense of immersion, but Fluttershy uses Pet, so I don't create awkward conversation when he doesn't have a name. And I thought of "Pet" because that was a pet name that was used to call me by, uh, women...
Pretty sure it's the Everfree Forest, not Evergreen. Also watdufugshy.
723869 You're right, it is. These are written late at night, so I have sleepy mistakes scattered. Proofreading at 1AM doesn't help get everything. Thanks
723849heh women anyway im a big fan and i cant wait for more
723849oh my gosh i didnt even notice that
i dont think your writing couldnt get any better ITS
AMAZING
YOUR BIGGEST FAN pooch56
Very... good?
Very good. But...
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I sense a orgy coming up...
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;:3
You lost me at the collar.
I don't understand. Honestly, If I were in this guys situation, I would have gotten violent as soon as she put the collar on me.
His submissiveness rubs me the wrong way.
Sorry Fluttershy, but its true.
Honestly if Fluttershy treated me like this, I would not hesitate to hurt her. (and she's my favorite)
i see an error 'she moves her hands forward and begins cleaning up front' what hands? really what are hands?
jajajajajajajajajaja
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BTW, if it's not scat, futa or gay, I'll read it.
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I agree, I'm generally a nice person but when someone rubs me the wrong way (not like that you dirty people) for long enough I get angry. And seriously, she's fricken three feet tall! How the hell could she be threatening? What could she do that would actually hurt enough to stop you? But, this is coming from a guy who can run through 30ft of nettles in shorts without a second thought so perhaps I'm not the best reference point when it comes to pain.
724775 I really hate it too, and I'd react the same way. The only problem is that he's forced to do this if he wants to stay in a shelter, you know since it's dangerous in the wild and all that. I'm pretty sure he'll get back at her in the end, though.
i love it
and i like how i made you talk about the name ''pet'' more
if you want to know how i did just private masseg me (p.s. im talking to the writer)
your faithful reader pooch56
i am your biggest fan
I have the feeling matriarchal society (More female dominance). The males will be more less themselves but more put down. Your character being male and human allows for more abuse then say a stallion who is seen to have some rights. Do I get a cookie for guessing somewhat in the right direction.
727177 Exactly, I see the Stallions as being aloof and more to themselves a majority of the time, they don't really have much to do with anyone but themselves, or their so busy with what they are doing they don't have much interaction with the mares. Except for certain married stallions and a couple background ones on a date.
Being seen as human is as Fluttershy says, another animal, and because of that, causes him to be belittled. Though, after getting to know him, Fluttershy now respects him on a level equal to her, it's just that she's into the feeling of dominance. She's been doing so since she saw him as an animal, you know, before the boundary of bestiality and regular sexual relations disappeared. (It happened in both your mind and Fluttershy's because you both saw each other as animals at first)
Plus, being ruled by a female twice as large as any stallion and immensely more powerful has to spark some sort of female dominance, especially considering how long she's been ruling.
And yes, you do get a cookie.
i listened to pet as i read this. after seeing "Pet" so many times i sorta had to.
Yay!! Nom nom nom (If only I knew how to post images I would). The sweetest vengeance other then rebelling (Which could get him killed) is getting all the females pregnant (Who knows what stuff happened to his anatomy passing between borders of Realms [At least he wasn't turned into a pony]).
Oh god horrible thought what is going to happen when the time for all the mares go into heat (Locking himself in a closet doesn't seem likely).
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Most fanfics state the ponies besides Celestia and Luna are between 3 to 4 feet tall but that is height. Length and Width can be a different matter entirely (Especially when she is laying on top of you and weight has always been a random factor in these fanfics).
its your biggest fan
this is how i feel about this story
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Wish I could be Fluttershy pet.
727477
Here is a couple questions I would like to ask.
1. The human we see ourselves as does he come from our earth or a slightly magical earth?
The reason I ask is that changing from a non-magical world to a magical one could have benefits to the human (Though it does take time to start manifesting [I.E. Magic Resistance {Getting magic raped kinda makes that want to happen in the near future}, Enhanced physical capabilities, being able to perform spells {Least favorite due to the spells are the same or beefed up somewhat to the Unicorn and Alicorn spells}, Sperm production is capable of impregnating the ponies, and/or Rapid Healing capabilities {If he is going to be punished quite a bit this would be a nice thing to give him}).
2. If I hadn't already asked are we going to see the Wild Molestia and/or Raping Luna?
3. If there is a season of heat for the mares will the Stallions assist him somewhat by sneaking him into hiding the night before (That would be like all the stallions to go into hiding not to be rutted to unconsciousness)?
4. Is Spike still into Rarity?
If so I could see him somewhat assisting the human not so mush out of friendship but to keep Rarity from having fun that way (Living in that type of environment he would have to have seen something or read about it).
5. Stench/Pheromones how does he smell to em specifically (and likewise to about them)?
Human stench is considered somewhat different to pony and saying that does he smell really good to em when he sweats or does he smell get out of the kitchen stank.
728889 Ok, i'm glad to see this, some of these I hadn't even thought of and I'm glad you asked.
1) He comes from our earth, but he may be able to perform magic eventually if he continues to get exposed to magic. Much like radiation, but it won't kill him, instead he could channel it. If someone teaches him. So resistance to magic is definitely one of the bigger possibilities. But, Twilight may begin experiments on herself and our hero so that might end up revealing some of the other abilities.
2) You haven't asked yet, and while I'm unsure about Luna, I have thought about Molestia being a big possibility
3) While right now it seems like everyone is in heat, that may happen. I can see the Stallions working with our hero rather than being jealous or otherwise. He's already befriended Spike and Angel, so Big Mac may be able to help our hero once Applejack starts riding our hero too.
4) Spike IS into Rarity still, I want everything to still be as close to the actual series as possible. So, things like that, you can assume are the same for this story also.
5) Our hero does have a unique smell, and the ponies see, or confuse, the stronger the smell as being sexual arousal. So when he blushes, sweats, etc. They see it as them turning him on and wanting to mate with them. The scent also turns them on too. Right now only Fluttershy's scent could have meaning to our hero, but that is still tentative. Perhaps as he grows fonder to the ponies that may change, but right now it just makes the mares want him all the more.
729009
It was interesting how Fluttershy punished Twilight for beating on the human (Though I expected in the lust of events she would have been spanking her flank during the intercourse sequence [Too aggressive isn't it]).
729127 Yeah, I thought Twilight should be included instead of just doing her thing and disappearing, it'd be kinda awkward that way, so Fluttershy took my advice and included her in the scene. And no, spanking her flank wouldn't be too aggressive in the heat of the moment. Just didn't think of it.
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If you need any OCs to use you can use the ones in my blog. I am good at coming up with interesting characters but not so much with stories.
Besides the basic Pony types (Earth, Unicorn, and Pegasus) are you going to use the forgotten ones (Sea-Ponies [Would add to an interesting encounter while washing in a stream] and Fairy Ponies [Though interesting when you look at changelings they look like degenerated Fairy Ponies somewhat])?
729205 Maybe, I don't know just yet. I still got a lot of characters to introduce so maybe after that, I'll probably do something like using other subspecies of ponies before OC's... either that or the OC can have the encounter.