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1578323 Your thought beyond a menial word please?
1579553 thats it its done no long chapter
1580153 Excuse me?
I'm going to make a critique, I hope that's all right.
Well, first off, I really enjoyed the story. The character's emotions were believable and there weren't 'Mary Sue' moments.
I feel the last chapter of the story was a bit rushed and that there was more to the story. There was one spelling error I noticed, "Far from th Quarray eels, Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash landed on the highest peak of the canyon." Besides that, great story! I really enjoyed reading it.
2448114 Thank you! I'm always up for critique unless stated otherwise.
ya laost me at metal wings
2642226 It could happen! If horses can fly and speak and do magic, they can have prosthetic wings.
Season Five finale confirms it! Yay you!