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FnordBear


I am a bear slightly smarter than my cat.

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Ponyville is known for strange happenings and being prepared for most anything, but it is very much not prepared for it's resident princess to go missing after a magical mishap. Worse it is virtually crushed when a strange being walks out of the Everfree bearing her lifeless body.

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This is my second attempt at a Pony-flavored work of fiction. I am and always shall be in love with the "Stranger in a Strange Land" genre of fiction. Human and slice of life (as well as the mature) tags are the only ones I will place on this story but I plan to touch on many other tags, I just don't want to put a mass amount of tags on a story and lure someone in to reading under false pretense.

This story will be written with each chapter being as self-contained a story as possible, meaning an episodic format.

Things you won't find:
-Foul-mouthed youthful "human" protagonist. Hero Protagonist is an older gentleman.
-Tons of referential humor. There will be funny parts but I feel like I would be a failure as a writer if I have to reference something in pop-culture to make a scene funny.

What you will find:
-A backstory that will unfold over time.
-A "human" from a world not like our own. This is not an Earth "human".
-An eventual revelation as to why I put "" around "human".
-Cake (this may be a lie).

At the end of the day I write this for myself. I welcome you to come with me on this journey. I always accept constructive criticism.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 11 )

I like this a fucking lot :derpytongue2: the only thing I don't like is that each chapter is its own story. most of the time I don't like those but I will give this a try,

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Think of it like Star Trek, each episode was a self contained story but had the same characters and referenced past events. That's really how I should describe it (and update said description) It will be Episodic in format.

Also thank you for the compliment. If you will excuse me I have to go insert a new videocard in to my computer.

I like these words, and request more of them. :pinkiehappy:

Good first installment. The plane of existence you describe I swear I have read another story that used it or it was a movie that I watched in the past.

I really enjoyed this story and look forward to the next installment. If it is a good as the first one this story will of earned a spot on my favorite list.

That was strangely beautiful in its own way also nice jab at twilight there towards the end she deserves a good knockback most of the time to cool down her ever on fire horn, mind and flank.

P.S.
Someone just liked this post.....what a strange world we live in.
Normally people just ignore me and call me a old man and pony hater.......its nice to feel liked sometimes.

i love this sooooo much

Bravo sir. Bravo
I wish to observe what The Gift of Names entails

Also, you have lied

Things you won't find:
-Foul-mouthed youthful "human" protagonist. Hero Protagonist is an older gentleman.
-Tons of referential humor. There will be funny parts but I feel like I would be a failure as a writer if I have to reference something in pop-culture to make a scene funny.

-Cake (this may be a lie).

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I appreciate the feedback :)


And there has yet to be cake.

7582299 It was a joke, a nitpicky joke at that but a joke nontheless

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