Chapters will be slower due to my computer being damaged. This is with my phone.
If you are a fan of my story Grandchildren of Discord, you will like this 
Screwball just found out she was pregnant. She and her family were incredibly overjoyed. But what Screwball doesn't know is that being pregnant is much work than she thought. How will she handle it? And how will Mothball handle it? With mood swings, tiredness, nausea, weird food cravings. Honestly, who gets it worst? Mothball or Screwball?
Join the married couple in this unusual pregnancy.
( Each chapter is a separate story. If not, I will tell you.)
Chapters (2)
This is pretty interesting, a few spelling errors here and there, and a bit rushed, but I still enjoy this, and look forward to more.
6846012 Thanks. I know I have spelling errors, and I am looking for an editor but thanks.
I have school tomorrow so lets see when I have time to write.
6846012 And, would you mind telling me where you felt like it was rushed? I want you to do it so I don't make the same mistake.
I mean the parts where characters immediately go to the Crystal Empire, or how Screw Ball just mentions it out of nowhere so they could go. It's still good I like the idea of them going, but I felt like they just immediately took action in something before talking about it.6847554
6848039 That's completely understandable. Honestly, I did it cause I really didn't have anything to make them do in this first chapter. But I will try and not repeat those mistakes. Thank you.
Wait there a fourth one now! I haven't even finish Daughter of Discord yet!
6902174 Hehe, well I wish you luck on your journey!
6902264 But I don't like Daughter of Discord, Bride of Discord was okay and I haven't touch the third yet. Thank you.
6902274 Uh okay. Everyone has their own thoughts. If you wish you could drop by and check my story. It doesn't really have anything that is in Daughter of Discord. And since im not the same author maybe its different. Well I don't mind if you don't. Have a good day
This is my opinion, and this as a lot of criticism, so yeah
First off, have the Alternate Universe tab, cause there's a lot that doesn't make sense unless it's on, like the fact there's another alicorn in the Crystal Empire, or the fact Cadence and Shining Armor knows Screwball and Mothball, and a lot more too, so turn it on so your story can make more sense. Next, I believe in an alternate world where a daughter of chaos is born from nothing and is married and pregnant to a changeling, and a draconequus is married to a pegasus, I really do, but a filly getting married to someone who is probably way older in 6 months just, makes me really unstable, as you even called Dinky yourself "a filly" so she's under the age of marriage, we dont even know the age of her future husband, which means we have to guess he is old enough to marry, which kinda is wrong, and also, PONIES AREN'T BORN WITH CUTIE MARKS! YOU EARN THEM BY FINDING YOUR SPECIAL TALENT! Also you cant tell what race a baby is, or color, before it's born, you can only see the baby in green and black, or something, not in full color, which means you wont know what fur or mane the baby has, or if it's unicorn, as it's not done being developed yet, and the fact she already has a cutie mark, really doesnt make sense, can piss off bronies who know the show, or make science bronies facehoof their head off. Also waiter is male, waitress is female, you can't have a male waitress, as a waitress is female, you need to use, waiter as waiter is male.
I also notice you called the baby a she when right after they characters ask when will they find out the gender, so in chapter, say "It!" not she, as that contradicts the gender question.
So please, fix all those mistakes by having Dinky old enough, not still a filly, change "she" to "it" in chapter 2 as we wont know the babies gender, get rid off the unicorn and color part, as, thats not how early pregnancy checks work, as a baby's form wouldnt be complete to showing it's race, and pregnancy checks arent in color when you get to see the baby inside the womb, only green, change waitress to waiter, and add the AU tag, then you're good to go
Sorry this is very very criticized, but it makes 0 sense whatsoever with the way it is right now
7060175 Okay, first I'm the author. Just been banned due to age.
Second, I respect your opinion... but.
This is a story explaining the pregnancy of Screwball. I have another story called Grandchildren of Discord. If you actually read that, it will make more sense. Second, Grandchildren of Discord is a sequel to Daughter of Discord, or Son In Law of Discord. So, there are some of DF's characters here. You may wanna do some research before you criticize. Also, I can't chance it, because I don't have access to the story. Story has been cancelled.
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Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon were born with theirs. It's possible, and is explained in like, Season 1.
I think this is really good! Other than minor mistakes, I love it!
I have actually been to a restaurant that took forever for our food to come and I have to say it is REALLY annoying when like that happens
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