• Member Since 4th May, 2012
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Axan Zenith


Vast, Immortal Suns.

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Dreamer is a pony on a quest.

A quest not meant for the faint of heart. A quest for the brave, and a quest for the foolish. It is a quest to obtain the most rare, most elusive thing on the planet, something that is as beautiful as it is dangerous. It is sought by the many, and cherished by the few.

Dreamer is a pony on a quest for a thing called love.

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The cover art is actually a scanned copy of a commision done for me by the most talented Gearfish at Bronycon 2012. Go check out her deviantArt.

http://gearfish.deviantart.com/

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 36 )

I'm just going to put this out there for everypony to see.

I started writing this completely on a whim. After I wrote the Prologue, I started frantically thinking of plans to get someone that could be considered a professional to do the cover art, have it pre-read about 3 million different times, and even considering on getting it on EqD.

And then I stopped, whipped up an image in all of about 10 minutes, and threw this onto FiMFiction on another whim.

Tell me what you think, so I can decide whether or not to let this rot in Tartarus.

Does this... Dreamer, perchance have a green coat and a guitar cutie mark?

Hm...interesting. :moustache:

Smacked in the face... I like it!

BR

Way to narrowly avoid clop there, buddy.

720554

He does not, in fact. Silver coat, thought bubble cutie mark. (Refer to cover art.)

720727

I try. :ajsmug:

721079 If you want, I know someone who's pretty good at artwork. I could link you to their DeviantArt and you could ask them to make a cover art for you. :pinkiehappy:

721087

I may have to take you up on that. For now, though, I think I'll just see how people like it so far.:twilightsmile:

721079
Yeah, I know. I was just referencing a crossover RLYoshi and I did. We both approve of the story.

The Hovermic and Mobius Seal of Approval has been awarded!

722796

I have no idea what that is, but it sounds cool, so, yay! :yay:

724372
If I can get RL online, he can help explain.

724372 Long story short, I wrote a story where a character was named Dreamer and had a green coat and a guitar cutie mark. During a crossover with Mobius's story, Dreamer dies. Mobius was basically jokingly saying we're not gonna sue you or anything. :rainbowlaugh:

I like how you end it when he is about to get smack in the face. ha ha ha-hmm

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I enjoyed writing it as much as you enjoyed reading it, my friend. :pinkiesmile:

Well, needless to say, this chapter took a lot longer than I thought it would. I had to scrap the opening scene about 3 times before I even liked the damn thing, but it turned out as well as could be expected. Give me some feedback of how I'm doing with this whole dialogue thing. It's never been my strong point, and I don't want this story to have wooden sounding conversations.

Anywho, like it or not, give me your opinions! All kinds of criticism are welcome. :twilightsmile:

that was way past 20%

Story isn't half bad, slick. Can't wait to see where you are taking this. Dialogue is pretty good so I don't think you need to worry too much about it.

How often can we expect updates? :coolphoto:

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As often as they come. :ajsmug:

Honestly though, I have no idea. :derpytongue2:

I like the prologue :moustache:

It took me 32 days to write around 1,800 words.


Goddamnitt Skyrim.

Seriously though, that took me way too long.

I sowwy. I'll try to be better next time, promise. :fluttershysad:

927297

They're everywhere, apparently. I have a friend who's absolutely terrified of them.

por kid he just think a lot but that a good thing sometime
can't wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

Haha! Another chapter down, albeit a short one, and it only took me-

Oh.

Damn.

*le sigh*

Sorry guys. I dunno, this story is starting to feel stale to write. What do you guys think? Let me know via comment, PM, elite sniper team sent to stop me from ever writing again, etc, etc.

like were this is going :pinkiehappy:

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That makes one of us. :unsuresweetie:

Hmmm....

It was a good start, but I think you're trying too hard to work the relationships. As in: You're trying too hard to write a romance novel. Try to just let the characters talk to each other. Put them into a situation, get a conversation going, then write the setting in after they've ended the conversation.

Also, yes * 100000000 to Background Pony. Holy fuck, SS&E can write a fucking novel. grbarlarakwpoiapaowifaw.

Update on this fic, pretty please? :pinkiesmile:

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Ehhh...

I do want to finish this damn thing, I really do, but for some reason every time I sit down and try to write another miniscule chapter, I'm struck with a case of writers block bad enough to make Short Skirts and Explosions slow his roll.

Seriously, I think even my subconscious doesn't like this story. :applejackunsure:

I like the opening. The reading shall commence.

Not going to reread Background Pony. The last time I read it, I thought I'd been desensitized to the feels because I'd read it before.

I was wrong. It was existential crisis-inducing.

This story seems nice to me, and the way you're developing the characters is great. It's a shame it's probably not going to be continued. Thanks anyways.

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