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RoyalBardofCanterlot
Celestia and Luna's royal bard. Nature is my God, Art is my religion, Love is the Law. Concordia Invictus
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wow, just wow,
I like the whip myself but nothing wrong with a good spanking!!!
The thought of spanking with hooves makes me cringe a bit, but great fic none-the-less. I wish it was a bit longer, most of the good BDSM fics with Twilight in them have her as the Dom, but I LOVE the idea of her being Celestia's pretty little Subby.
6856375 Ponies have a tough hide so a hoof-spanking probably doesn't hurt too much. Anyway, thanks for the comment. I too love the idea of Subby Twilight.
Very sexy and Twilight's backstory makes sense. She does come from a high middle class background where such things are the norm.
They just went from punishment to cuddling a little too quickly. That's quite a change in mood all of a sudden. Also I think it would be better if Twilight was more into her role-playing and you didn't mention her marehood getting wet all the time. You should make it very vague and only give very subtle hints that it's exciting Twilight. The readers should be into the same mindset that Twilight is.
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I think of maybe even greater value is that pony's rump is very muscular and tough. It can take quite a bit. I do horseback riding and the rump is actually one of the toughest parts. With other parts you often have to be a little gentle with it but you can whip it as hard as you want, as long as you hit the rump.
i regret absolutely nothing
I know this comment is rather late, but I just feel the need to voice my opinion.
This story was cute and funny, as well as pretty well written. It was enough to make me smile (which isn't the easiest feat).
There was good buildup in the beginning, which was what I enjoyed most, but around the middle the writing started lacking detail or feeling. It just made it feel a bit unfinished and rushed. Otherwise it was an enjoyable little short story.
I was just imaging one last line saying:
One should be right and the other left, the first left should be right i suppose since in the next sentence she moves on to the left side, but she also started on the left i believe and didnt catch when she moved on to the right but might just be me.
Nice cute little story regardless.
Well then
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Is that a good well then or a bad well then?
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A good well then