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The Last Raven


When two creatures remain friends for a long time, they will usually do anything for each other. That is why Twilight is forced to go on an adventure to find a mysterious artifact that could possibly bring Spike back to life.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 13 )

No time to read now :fluttershysad:
But I will favorite as it sounds good :twilightsmile:

Jesus christ that is great writing, but you make Twi and AJ such sluts. :rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh:

That was great. You are an amazing writer, but maayyybe this should be under "Romance" aswell? :rainbowlaugh:

..........:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: Dafud did I just read?

Good story, don't get me wrong, and it's very sad, but seems kinda....... Random. Anyway, thumbs up and all that happy horse shit. Jolly good show.

Don't read this chapter with Linkin Park - Hands Held High playing...

I thank you all for your feed back! But this was still my first attempt at a fan fiction so please forgive me if i sorta went... off topic.

Twilight dies, and everybody is just like, "Don't mourn her death, bro."
Seems legit.

No, but really, I enjoyed this story. It was a good one :rainbowkiss:

man i could kick any body or pony in a game of Texas hold'em

"Now this behavior I would expect from Applejackā€¦" No shit! Cuz we all know that Applejack is a slut and this show is Jersey Shore.
Aside from that part this was a pretty good first chapter.

This is probably the must rushed multy chapter story I've read so far.
Horrible ending by the way. It isn't sad. It's just you making the characters miserable cuz you can. But well you did revive Spike and the others, though I have no idea where's the romance of this story.

1323176 I'd just like you to know i tried my best on this story sir and by the way, there's a difference between constructive criticism and just being plain rude.

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