Rainbow Dash and Applejack had been together for many years now. First as rivals, then best friends, and now marefriends. Neither can deny that the years they have been together have been the best in their lives. Now Applejack wants to make it permanent. After months of planning it out, Applejack finally has asked Rainbow Dash for her hoof in marriage.
She never expected Dash to say "I can't".
Made for the Monthly Shipfics Group
Special Thanks to EZTP (Aka 2135D on Fimfiction). Please support him and commission from him!
Thanks to DBZorDie for editing.
Chapters (1)
I'd like to have a sequel or extra two chapters detailing Rainbow tearing her parents a new one. Is... is that too much? Oh it is? Well shiet.
For some reason that artwork makes RD look like a changeling. Did enjoy the fic too!
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I might do a second story to follow this
Aw, that was adorable. Sad, but adorable!
MY HEART! GAH!
Congrats on the feature, m8.
LOVED IT, TAKE MY FAVOURITE
I know that this is a one shot.... BUT U WANT A SEQUEL.... the wedding, the parents and the arguments hehe.... ... ... ... Pleeeaasseeee
I'll read this later.
That was AMAZING
or else I’d kick them in the groins
...oddly specific blasphemous boast...
Awesome! Truly wonderful!
How morbidly curious... a ship story where the prospect of marriage has a relatable obstacle that hasn't been over used yet.
The like is earned! If you make a sequel tale that resolves/handles past events in an epic fashion... well we'll see.
my feeellllsssss
hate to say this but i want more lol something like rainbow and her parents being reunited or something like that
So in your headcannon, is Equestria the name for the kingdom Celestia and Luna rule or for the entire planet? I ask because I thought the Cutie Map only covered that which bore the name "Equestria".
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Kingdom
Such a sweet story
Damn, you did it again!!! Amazing story with drama and without horror and death! XDDD
You earned a fav, a thumbs up and this:
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6870447 I second this statement.
Wow. Another emotionally charged story from Rated Ponystar. Here's a like and a fav.
I reviewed this story!
My review can be found here.
WHAT.A.STORY
I loved every bit about it.
And the end...... well ill just say this:
Ohhhhhhhhhhh
MY LIKE AND FAV DEFINITLY
Damn, this was outstanding! Not only did it earn its place in my Favorites, but also my BestoftheBest and Feels shelves.
Like most people around these areas, I just want a good story, I can't find myself enjoying a story if I focus too much on the technical things that really just make me enjoy the story less.
Now after saying all that, I liked this fic. 9/10 thumbs up + fave
It's a surprisingly meh story. The conflict was too generic, the resolution too simple and all around it could have used a bit more creativity. Not bad by any means but I've come to expect more from you.
This was an excellent break from my usual reading.
A little sweet, a little spicy; a little slice of life, a happy ending. Keeper.
I don't see why jnzsblzs got so many downvotes; it's a fair comment.
This was pretty 'meh' as he said. Making out, fight, hugs, gossip, and making up. Straight forward as is expected of old short stories; stringent.
I think the portion that harmed this story the most was the method of involvement of the four friends, and the minimal involvement of the family. Exclusion wouldn't have been unnecessary. Depicting the issue as something closer to home would've opened the door to better character development of the protagonists. As it has stood, Dash exists in the extremities of the plotline; The partially off screen friendship gossip with Fluttershy could've been played between Dash and Applejack themselves with appropriate adjustments. Although I can see such a change making the story at least a little longer with pacing.
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Thanks!
What a lovely piece
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AHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA, how has nobody pointed this out yet???????????? im fucking dying