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fluffinthepuff


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Princess Celestia has three bright fillies that she took in as her students. One will become a crazed unicorn bent on her views, one would transfer to another dimension, and the third would follow the destiny set out for her from the start. Over time, they become the best of friends. Can Twilight keep them close enough to eventually bring them back?

Cover art by frostykat13 on Deviantart

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 32 )

I have my attention.

This book seems interesting I want to read more :raritycry:

I love this and I'm in love with the idea of this!:derpytongue2: Well done you've written a great story:twilightsmile:

Good story but the chapters seem a little short. Not trying to be rude but in my opinion a chapter should be at least 2,000 words long.

6846588 Hey, it's okay, we all have our opinions. I just don't want a chapter to feel like it's just dragging on.

6847144 It's just that the story feels rushed if it's to short you know what I mean

Another chapter to love!:pinkiehappy: Can't help but dawww at wittle Twily!!:rainbowkiss::heart:

6848363 I know. I tried to make her out to be a cute as I know she is.:twilightblush:

Aww! Twiliy helped little Star! D'aww.

I love this story! I just wish the chapters were longer but this is really something. I wonder how SUnset will react when she finds out Starlight is hanging with you know who? :twilightoops:

This sounds pretty interesting.

6848950 We'll find out soon, now won't we?:trixieshiftright:

YES!!!! Twilight, Sunset, AND Starlight?!?!?! This is the greatest thing ever!!!! They would be the best of friends. I wonder what you have planned to have them torn apart?

Maybe Sunset does her whole arch of being Celestia's student and this torn the group of friends apart. when she runs to EQG Twilight becomes the star student. then, with both of her friends gone, starlight goes off to start her Marxist cult!!!

7063827 Why thank you very much, my friend.:moustache:

I think this story has some potential, I'll defiantly be keeping an eye on it.

Btw if u need an editor just pm me and i think longer chapters would work

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I might take you up on that at some point, and thank you for voicing your opinion on chapter length.

Friendly word of advice, link to frostykat13's Deviantart profile.

beter and berter every ch cant wait to read the next ch so till than I look forward to more ch or storys you make

7358270 You know, I tried to do that but it wouldn't let me, but thank you for the tip.

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no problem btw i love your profile pic its adorable:heart:

Yes. All the Harry Potter. ALL THE HARRY POTTER!

7360488 Congratulations on finding my references to only one of the best book series EVER!:rainbowkiss:

Good story, hopefully it isn't dead and gets updated at some point.

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