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A frequent pegasus who posts infrequent stories.

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Comments ( 16 )

Awesome work!

Kinky stuff there. :derpytongue2:

Hot <3 and kinky :)

Oh... From the title I thought this was an Assassination Classroom crossover.

Like often, the story is so short and rushed.
Maybe you should downprice it so that people will commission larger stories.

I didn't really like that you made Cadance younger. It takes away a lot of the fun.

I really enjoy your work, the stories are always fun and interesting.
My only complaint would be that it's a little short, but that doesn't stop it from being awesome.

UNF. Normally I opt for straight watersports over the diaper-based variety. Diapers are something which need to be done exceedingly well to get me excited. This got me excited. It's been a while since a written medium has gotten me as invested in diaper-play as this did. I tip my hat to you, I enjoyed this very much. Now, if you'll excuse me,
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Short, but very very nice.

I'll just say you did a great job as usual. Short but very sweet. Kinda helps that I engage in similar scenerios, so I may be biased.

It's hot but way too short. The clop was very rushed as well. It's not bad and still earned a like and fave but try not to rush so much. The clop scenes should be much longer.

oh my god Scribe you are my favorite :raritydespair:

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I think that's one of the problems of commissions and the fact that his prices are so high. He is told what to do and he has a set amount of words he can use. Therefore he often has to cram a lot of content in very few words.

The scary but fun part of this is that Cadance and Shining Armor have probably done something like this before. CANONICALLY.

Cadance slipped out of the room, ducking down into the connected bathroom. Shining raised his head in curiosity, his ears straining to hear any sort of sound.

I would think Shining wouldn't have much confidence in Cadance's ability to spice it up. It would be stronger if he doubted her only to then get shocked by her outlandish idea.

bending deeply

Cadance is still an alicorn.

she now leaned in close to Shiny, her diaper pressing against his member

How is that possible? This isn't anthro so Shining is standing on all 4. When writing sex scene's you need to be very specific about their positions otherwise it can get very confusing.

A loud hissing erupted from her diaper as her bladder cut loose into the thirsty padding

It would have been better if she pooped instead.

Cadance now busied herself with rubbing her swollen diaper front with a hoof

I think Shining would have sternly told her not to. She is now submissive to him so only he is allowed to give her pleasure. Rubbing off isn't allowed in class after all. Shining is teacher so he can do whatever he wants and she is dependent on him for her sexual release.

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