I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP
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Why do I feel like this is some sort of Shaperean comedy?
6826151 If you by chance is referring to the Shakespeare, but that does sounds like a far stretch for a comparison here?
Funny thing is that I never really intended it as comedy, and have no intention to write such broad public stories.
Ps: Is that the jest thrown onto the Queen Chrysalis?
6834872 Maybe. I still like it tho.
6834943 Either way, I am still happy to write and publish the story just for you.
Why so many dislikes? I think this is actually fun. Though the perspective change I don't like at all. Tidy it up.
6849525 I need more readers and exposure to the right audience on that part.
Is it the change itself, or where the perspective went of to?
Would you prefer to see more Pinkie Pie(Pony) or more Queen Chrysalis(Changeling in the story?
6851664 There should only be one pespective change per chapter. Meaning that if you change perspectives grab the chance to do so in the start of the chapter, AND KEEP IT till the end of the chapter at least. Or try what Sketchy does in http://www.fimfiction.net/story/232517/hate-thy-neighbor be subtle and no color changes especially that blue/green thing.
6852530 One perspective per chapter, that is as far as it goes.
As to the colours, I can clear that up in a minute, should be fixed now.
There are just Pink for Pinkie Pie, and the Teal/Turquoise for Crizzy.
Naturally, a black perspective will be introduced later along the story.