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Lise


If you happen to cry, I will be there. If you happen to smile, will you do the same for me?

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Princess Celestia has ruled Equestria since its creation. She has defeated countless threats to ensure her little ponies are safe. When someone from her past appears threaten this, there is only one being that Celestia can turn to — Discord, for only he knows what really happened in the past.

Written for the 9th **** this prompt! contest.

Contains heavy references to previous MLP generations.

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Comments ( 33 )

6820876
My thought exactly. *BOOM*

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:) Thanks, but unlikely.
There are a bit too many G1-2 references. Also I don't like her being a villain (both of the hers) :(

Wow she really is delusional if she thinks she can actually beat Megan I grew up with generation 1 there's no way she can win she's going to lose badly if she tries to fight and it will be hilarious when she realizes there's no chance for her to win and that she screwed herself and she's going to have to face justice for all she's done and as for the wands I remember how those things work there's no way that could beat the rainbow she's way too overconfident

6821967 :) Well she does have the wands :)
Also Megan did bow to her once :D

6821807 well it's true the wands are somewhat powerful they have always been shown to be not as powerful as the rainbow of light I mean that little locket was very powerful I guess the best way to be to put it is if the wands were regular missiles the locket would be a WMD both can do very bad damage but one can just do more and I agree with you she did bow but I'm pretty sure she's not going to but Bow anymore in a way I feel bad for Tiffany she's not going to win she can't win but she's going to try her hardest even if it is misguided plus with no charge those wands are as good as useless

6822009 They were never compared directly, I think.
But the wants had the power to transform the world :)

And yes, a pity about Tiffany. Beng the only one with wings could do that...

6822054 well the road to hell is paved with good intentions and they actually did compare the wands once to the rainbow of light but I'm not sure which episode that was you know it's actually pretty nice to talk to somebody about generation 1 she seems to forget that in magical land she lives in no villain ever truly wins even if they are in power for a long time one day they will fall and fall hard

6822099 The Quest of the Princess Ponies.
Is also the one I which Tiffany wanted to become Queen :)

This made me wish I knew more about the earlier generations. Which is an odd position to be in.

6822123 Nonagon :)
All you need to watch is this:

http://youtu.be/hmMvzkcfD-0

(Also be prepared for 80s cartoon style and gaffs :))

The justice in the end that'll befall backstabbing traitor that is tiffany or as she believes her self to be called celestia is will be delicious.

6822346 *dramatic music* :)

I'm confused over who exactly is the bad guy and why but it was still interesting.

6822443 :) It's a reference to the first generation of ponies :) (And yes, the names really are canon in that regard)

If you are brave enough here is a link to the episode I question:

http://youtu.be/hmMvzkcfD-0

:)

6822486 I can't sit through that horrorshow and I prefer the ambiguity anyway but if your going to be linking that video to everyone who has questions it might be easier to just put it in the description.

6822531 Sorry :( Forgot I had done that already :(

Might be too extreme to link it in the Desc directly :)

Hmm. I'm not usually one for tyrannical Celestias, but I do love intergenerational integration, and this is a very creative way of linking them. Still, there are a number of ways that Queen Sunbutt can fall, from both within and without. It gives me hope for this world, because her mad reign certainly doesn't. Death of the personality is a heavy price to pay to avoid death of the body.

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:) "innocence consumed by undying rage"

Thanks. :) Very glad you enjoyed! :D
Love mixing things up, wherever possible. Brings for weird images O:)

And yes, Tyrant Celestia has almost failed many times... If only she would stop believing she is the good one. Guess she just needs a Pacificsm or two (7th Ed) :)

I'm afraid I have to admit I barely understood any of that. I picked up on it being a reference to the previous generations, but having never seen them, the actual names really meant little to me. Still, I liked the concept of it, with the implied relationships between everyone and all that. The most successful villain is the one who can stand in the broad limelight while looking like they're the hero, after all.

6822722 Thanks :)
It is indeed very reference heavy (borderline crossover). Was just feeling experimental, and a bit out of the zone, so went ahead with some chaos anyway O:)

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Well, it was an interesting read regardless. There are a number of stories that alternately have Celestia as a failure, a bigot, a general screw-up, whatever, but there aren't many that make her straight-up a villain like this.

Also, "I need your ass," snrk.

Some pretty big grammar issues, but otherwise very well done. Very well thought out indeed.

6822937 :) Thanks :D

While I'm not fond of "Tyrantlestia".. This one is an originally done premise from what I've seen, well put together with plenty of references to the older times, with some plausible thought to how the world of Equestria works under 'Celestia's' rule.

I give this an upvote, and a hopeful thought that it will continue someday.

6827496 Many thanks :)
At this point unsure if I'll follow it up. I like Celestia too much...

My dear writer, you had my curiosity, but now you have my attention. I really want to know more about what's gonna happen (if you're down for it, anyway). All those inter-generational references had me reeling backwards, and I have so much I wanna know about what's going on.

Tyrant!Celestia isn't really on my to-read list, but damn if this didn't make me want more.

7113436 :) Glad you enjoyed :)
Actually, I have considered expending this to a multi eventually. :D (no idea when exactly, though).
I'm still in the experiment I got phase, playing about with various concepts. Still... Princess Tiffany was interesting :D

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Well, I look forward to what you have to show nonetheless! I'll be sure to keep a look out (and perhaps give a read to some of your other stories... Eventually, knowing me, heh).

As someone who grew up with and loved the G1 cartoon, this is an interesting take on all the MLP stuff. I respectfully ask for a sequel!

6827980 It appears that we are referencing all the generations of MLP, of which I only know one.

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I despise the concept of having your identity forcefully changed so much (I think it could be genuinely classified as a phobia at this point) that I've created a ranking system for it, from "All Clear" to "Extinction". Worlds can jump up and down as conditions change.

A Rank 1 is a world where none of the requisites are met - none wish to forcibly change others, no method exists, and nobody has the potential. Run of the mill stuff.

Rank 2 has one met requirement. I call this "Be Wary".

Rank 3 has two requirements met, but the third is either impossible, or will take a long time. It's titled "Standby".

Rank 4 has two met requirements, and the third is not only possible, but is within reach. It's titled "Track Target".

As it is now, I'd rank this continuity as a 5. Rank 5 worlds contain forbidden knowledge (in this case, the spell to mess with personal identity), the will to use it, and the means. Worlds will be allowed a window of time to correct themselves if there are heroes opposing the instigator, but should the heroes fail or time run out then for the safety of all parallel worlds this must be wiped from the record. All they need at this point is the ability to move between worlds and everything's :yay:ed.

Rank 5 worlds are to be Glassed, their surface melted and atmosphere boiled until there is nothing save a lifeless rock. Then to ensure the offending information cannot spread, ever, all surrounding planetoids within the solar system are to be Glassed as well, regardless of potential for life.

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