Applejack and Rainbow Dash get in a heated discussion about their feelings for each other. They learn something about themselves that they did not know was in their hearts.
Applejack and Rainbow Dash get in a heated discussion about their feelings for each other. They learn something about themselves that they did not know was in their hearts.
New speaker = new paragraph. Always.
Also, it felt a bit rushed. But it wasn't terrible.
AMAZING
That seemed very rushed but it was ok.
A bit rushed, but nice.
I loved it! One of my favourites now!!