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Applejack and Rainbow Dash get in a heated discussion about their feelings for each other. They learn something about themselves that they did not know was in their hearts.

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Comments ( 5 )

New speaker = new paragraph. Always.
Also, it felt a bit rushed. But it wasn't terrible.

That seemed very rushed but it was ok.

A bit rushed, but nice.

I loved it! One of my favourites now!! :raritywink:

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