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Lethrael


I'm a German writer, who just get into the Brony fandom a year ago. I love to write and do it usually in German, but am willing to improve my mediocre English with the translation of my first fanfic.

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Scootaloo is a wonderful little filly.
But she missed a few things.
First and foremost the one thing everypony around her can. Flying.
Being the one pegasus in school unable to fly made her an outcast.
Even the few friens of her, who could fly, are moving into the next step, the junior fly camp.
She is left behind and has to make a desicion, where she want to live.
She chose to move to a town on the ground, Ponyville.
She met many ponies down there and started to like it here.
But she also missed her mum. She missed her so much...

The story started before the first episode and followed the show.
Co-read, corrected and edited by Lucky Flame.
First Chapter complete edited.
Thanks for your work.

Chapters (33)
Comments ( 7 )

Uh... would you like an edited?

6827095 Please, my english isn't so well.
So feel free to correct my misstakes.

The story is good, but it is hard to read at points.
Look for an editor.
Dawn.

7430204
I do look for an editor for this story in a group.
And thanks for your comment.

7676480
Not in a regular bases.
A friend of mine helped me out here and then.
But my post in the forum is left blank, so I think my story isn't interessting for an editor.

I hope this story has a happy ending! I don't want the adorable and pillowlike Scootaloo to be sad!

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