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Cardinal Dan Productions
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This story is godly.
Liked, Fave'd and gave you a follow.
Keep up the awesome work.
This is looking good so far. I can't wait to meet Sunset's centaur foal.
this is going to be so good.
PREEMPTIVE FAVORITED!
no pressure
I could only find one spelling error. it's spelled empty not emptie.
can't wait for more. also, it's testicles.
ok firts of all WHAT and second THE FUCK................... how the hell she got pregant ...................
6821312 Did you read the first story?
6821320 yes i did and i like it .. but her being pregnat is just wtf.....still is a great story .
This will definitely be a track for sure
; especially with all the girl-on-girl action
.
The question that's constantly on my mind is what the foal will think when it gets old enough to understand why it has two human mothers, and one horse as a father
.
Goodness gracious im loving this.
All this lesbian stuff is great!
It's hard for me to take this seriously as clop when the progress from panties off to second orgasm is covered in one short paragraph, and the foreplay is just about the same length. Seriously, take your time. Draw out all the sexy details. Paint us a pornographic picture.
Also, flesh out who AJ and Sunset are and what each loves about who the other is (on top of what they find physically attractive). Without that sort of thing, and without substantial time for bonding and relationship stuff, I can't take the current "Romance" tag seriously. An additional problem is that Sunset and Applejack are completely flat characters, which helps to explain why this story will disappoint anyone who sees the romance tag and expects... well, romance.
As the story is presently told, it's kind of like a premature ejaculation. It might satisfy some guys unused to anything better, but it's not going to satisfy the gals, it's going to upset and embarrass guys with any real experience (on top of leaving them dissatisfied), and the way it rushes through the sex hints at some difficulty in dealing with the subject. Perhaps that difficulty is personal, perhaps it's simply lack of understanding (or a socially- and self-imposed assumption of lack of understanding) of female anatomy and feminine persons, but in either case, it shows.
Honestly, all of this applies to both of these SS x AJ x horse stories. There's some redeeming value in the ideas behind these stories, though. Take your time writing, pick up a stronger editor, and give your concepts enough well-chosen words to do them justice.
Well... Shit~
Can't wait for Sunset's big moment. Hope Applejack has strong bones.
Uhh ok?
6822638 she should get steel inserts into her hand for it... even then though
Oh; right when it was starting to get real good
Damnit, the suspense is killing me!
also, are we ever gonna figure out why tremors likes anal?
6829580 I wasn't planning on it. That was just a joke set up to imply that Applejack had spent some time with Tremors.
Guess their fear came to pass: She's gonna give birth at SAA while being far from the hospital.
6829825 could you elucidate in a side chapter? tremors is a mare right?
yep this is happening right now. Apple Jack best get to scribbling in that book to get Twilight on the farm.
The contractions have begun.
I'm ashamed to say that I released a very unmanly squee when the baby was born. Now... To Applejack's little problem.
Wow, I was expecting a traditional centaur. This is a better idea though.
So Harvest is like Shepherd0821's 4koma ponies?
Begins trying to calculate when the next chapter will come out but gives up after 5minutes and insteads stares at the comments for a bit before reading surigging then heading off to read something else till the next chapter comes out!!!!!!!!
I love this chapter it is just awwwww.
Damn things got intense at the beginning. Awesome chapter by the way. I hope to read more soon.
We now know that EG universe does not take place in America.
6821312 she's a horse that's how
Aaw so cute ok time to draw a family picture with applejack, sunset, chief and the baby
6834243 You forgot one little detail. Applejack got arrested.
well now this chapter is just perfect and I love the name Sunshine Harvest it is a exultant fit.
Celestia, still kicking ass even when she isn't a princess.
This chapter just reaffirmed to me the reason why Celestia getting pissed off is scary.
Was their a birth scene?
6835465 previous chapter
6835519 How intense was it?
*Sunset sits down and gets on her computer and reads this*
Sunset:What the fuck did i just read???
dont be surprised when i reference this in my story
6835536 so-so
6834574 im thinking the picture takes place 2 years later when everything is fine and happy :)
6835875 what do you mean
6837044 read it and find out for yourself
6837241 I am too squeamish.
6834574 How?
Bravo guys, this was awesome!
Umm... Sequel?
well now this is how to end a super story.
exultant work everypony.