While Star Bolt tries to forget his life of sin. An ancient evil sits and waits for the day that its prison will weaken so it can break free and finish its goal that was started 2000 years ago. The extinction of the alicorn race.
My name is Aran, and I have lived in Equestria for almost a year now. I don't remember how I arrived to Equestria, but I can never forgett what happened when I arrived. living dissection, Betrayal of trust, Speciesism and a general hatred towar
Loss. What is a loss? Is it losing something close? Or is it feeling like something inside you gave way? How do you cope with such a thing? No one knows for sure.
War has a way of searing more than pelt. As the ponies of Equestria engage in a titanic struggle for survival, it will take a stout few to weather the cackling mania that threatens to consume all.
Hiya! I'm the reviewer that claimed your story on Ponychan. Not bad, but it definitely needs some revisions. Will be working on the review for a while.
Take your time! There is no rush. See how few comments there are? Isn't like I have a legion of followers waiting.XD If you would like to tackle chapter three, feel free! If you do not have the time nor inclination however, no need to do so.
1749040 Ah. Quite understandable. Well, good luck to ya, and I do hope you continue this soon. I might have to reread some stuff though so I can remember a little better what happened lol.
In between S3 and S4, I hope to put out around 100k words split up into maybe 15-20 chapters. I more or less have the whole thing- and the half-dozen subplots- planned out. I just need to make sure that S3 doesn't canon bomb before I get that far into it.
If anypony has any questions, feel free to ask them and as long as I am at liberty to answer them, I shall.
Hiya!
I'm the reviewer that claimed your story on Ponychan. Not bad, but it definitely needs some revisions. Will be working on the review for a while.
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And just as I was setting up to reply on the Chan. Thank you for your time and effort!
no questions just waiting for more
770656 Hi there!
Sorry for the late reply and review. Lots has been happening in my life.
Also, if you wish for me to take the 3rd as well, I can actually start to work on it. I'm about a third of the way through chp 2.
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Take your time! There is no rush. See how few comments there are? Isn't like I have a legion of followers waiting.XD If you would like to tackle chapter three, feel free! If you do not have the time nor inclination however, no need to do so.
I am just waiting on the review before I move forward. I apologize for the delay.
I like this. I hope you continue it
1252155 I will for sure. For now, a combination of being really busy at the shipyard, my second child, and S3 has stayed my hand.
1749040 Ah. Quite understandable. Well, good luck to ya, and I do hope you continue this soon. I might have to reread some stuff though so I can remember a little better what happened lol.
1749073 Hehehe. Yeah, that will help.
In between S3 and S4, I hope to put out around 100k words split up into maybe 15-20 chapters. I more or less have the whole thing- and the half-dozen subplots- planned out. I just need to make sure that S3 doesn't canon bomb before I get that far into it.