The Tyrant of the Crystal Empire, King Sombra, has his sights on a new prize - Nyx, the Seeress of the fabled Marazon race. Hunting her is a pleasure, possessing her will give him the gift of seeing and controlling his future - and Equestria.
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Heh, thanks Dragonfan! I am the love child of a hyper and an overactive imagination, I admit it.
Maybe I watch too much t.v., but I can literally see in my mind's eye the conversation going on between Sombra and Iron Blade as if I were in the King's tent, observing it, stand just outside the circle of Bomber's executioners, seeing Blade's look of disgust and Sombra's indifference as they walk away. It's hard not to flesh out all that and I can't imagine it be would any good if I didn't.
I saw the Star Wars reference there.
Good chapter, sadly I don't feel too sorry for Night Bomber, all I could really think was "there goes another idiot" and shake my head.
7165793 Thanks for the compliments, Victus, and welcome to our little band of Marazon & Nyx fans. I try to update Seeress at least twice a month. Sometimes it's been once, but I'm back into a rhythm that should get all my stories updated more regularly. Once I finish up the next chapter of The King's Mice and my evil Mother's Day offering (see my latest blog about that here), I'll be back to the next chapter here.
Heh, yeah, I'm surprised it hasn't bugged someone else enough before now to mention it. I think I got carried away with paying His Highness the respect due a King. Since you mentioned it, I'm going to experiment with scaling back the excessive obesiance tributes whenever I mention Him, er "him". It's hard to catch them all and it has bugged me in readbacks from time to time as well. Thanks for mentioning it!
The dude's name has 'blade' in it! He's certainly one to talk about violence!