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Emotional Flight


A guy who enjoys reading other's stories and occasionally stays up late slamming his hands into the keyboard in a futile effort to make something coherent come out the other end.


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This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: Friendship is Overpowered (Season 1)


That was easy!


Join Twilight Sparkle, Sunset Shimmer and their friends as they easily defeat every challenge thrown at them with their awesome friendship powers.


A continuation of ocalhoun's Friendship is Overpowered series. Written for ocalhoun's Big 250k Contest.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 23 )

You even captured the rather problematic connotations that sometimes crop up with Friendship is Overpowered. In this case, I'm not sure if the girls ever befriended human Twilight. And because Crystal Prep lost, Cinch probably finagled with her application to Everton.

Or the girls overpowered her with friendship offscreen. Either or.

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Well, the idea was to replicate the tone, consistency, and or theme of the original story! :rainbowwild:

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Performance-enhancing drugs? Really, Sunset?

Nobody noticed Pinkie Pie swapping places with her counterpart.

You know that WOULD happen, sadly.

Bravo. Truly friendship is overpowered!

Well, this happened. :rainbowlaugh:

And it made me smile! :pinkiehappy:

Pinkie trading places with her counterpart is never a good sign. :pinkiecrazy:

And Canterlot High beats Crystal Prep, easily. :raritystarry:

This was fun to read, instant fave. :moustache:

Luvin it so far XD:pinkiehappy:

And by magical rainbows, I mean critical amounts of radiation! Friendship is Mutation! :pinkiecrazy:

"‘Expose to as much Friendship as possible in order to maximize your experience with this product.’”

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no high school musicals? You monster!

STILL NO HIGH SCHOOL MUSICAL NUMBERS!

So...how would you "overpower" the "Anon-a-Miss" incident?

You gonna keep updating this for every EqG movie?

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Probably? There aren't any right now to add.

Wait what happened to stop it?

Now that was solid, and you even managed to put in a few extra jokes, just for fun, and that's something we can all appreciate. And, of course, this story had to be done. There's no arguing that. The first chapter was definitely the best, and it was everything I could have hoped for from a story like this. The second chapter was a bit hard to keep track of, but pretty serviceable. The last chapter, though... I sort of felt like that one was a let-down. I didn't feel like it was clear which Twilight it was at first, and the method by which the plot was defeated was really kind of poorly explained. And then the vials of skills were even less explained. Still, that shouldn't overshadow the brilliance of the first chapter!


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A review for ocalhoun's big 250k contest.
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The first one was funny and this one got a chuckle out of me at the end. I just don't think I see the appeal in the Friendship Is Overpowered idea, :(

With Legends of The Ever free coming out... Any chance of an update to this story?

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