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With the life of Twilight Sparkle, follow her story as she is bitten by a radioactive spider and gets the powers of a spider to become New York City's hero, the Equestria Spider-Girl. Taking on the responsibility to take out crooks and super villains across the city and to keep the city safe.
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A very basic Spider-Man story with no real difference from the original source.
It is a good story, please continue it, it will be interesting to see how the story change, with differents perspectives.
Good work
One spell error and several grammar errors in the story but other than that it's not bad story idea..
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7153474 I'm afraid after a second read I must say I cannot pinpoint just one mistake as I now see more than a few mistakes that I missed but I can tell you this much... You sometimes are using the wrong word or missed a word.. You also tend to put one word where another word would be more effective or are using the wrong word. You also missed words you could've used to make the story flow more natural.. I say this because you are trying to force the story idea a little too much.. I know because I made the same mistake with one of mine.. It's in hold right now it was so bad... ..Also on a second read I now see a few more spell errors.. Enough to where I suggest you proofread your stories before you post it.. But please do not be discouraged by me pointing out mistakes made as I always make them myself and no one is perfect and I myself have been corrected many a time. You are going in the right way for making this a very good story.. You just need to polish it up some more. That's all.
7153474 I love this story keep adding more chapters when u get the cance