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I'm just another hopeless romantic of a brony who can't stop reading Twidash!

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Twilight has wanted to ask Rainbow Dash out for months, but has yet to muster up the courage to do so. Will Pinkie's New Year's party be the perfect chance to confess her feelings?

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Comments ( 18 )

This was so cute!!!!!

The build up was nice, you didn't go to overboard with the clichés that make some Twidash stories unbearable to read.

The pacing of the story was perfect.

The only thing I have to complain about was the lack of too many details in the kiss at the end. Don't get me wrong, it was pretty good, but I like it when I can the physical and emotional reactions of the characters kissing.

For instance rainbows wings could have flared open in a massive wingboner. Her eyes could have been really wide an confused as she states at Twi face so close to her own. Then eventually she'd relax and melt into the kiss.

But that's just me nit picking.

Really great story.

>>thedarkitty Can't thank you enough! And I totally see what you mean with the rushed kiss. I spent so much time on the concept and execution, I forgot to round the story out as well as I could have. Thanks again, I'll be sure to remember that for the next one!

I didn't make a New Year's resolution. I really don't bother with them, as few ever follow through with them.

Great Twidash though; have a like.

:derpytongue2: This was great! If you ever need any help just let me know!!! :pinkiehappy:

YOOOO that cover art finally gets used!:rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile:

This was pretty well done for your first fic, only things that I thought could be improved on was a little bit more details in certain situations. Such as the ending and how the kiss could have more to it, and how the story suddenly ended abruptly. Would have liked to see how their friends reacted to them hooking up.

All in all it was good for your first time writing, and I wish you luck on your future works.:twilightsmile:

P.S your not the only one who stopped being a lurker on this site.:rainbowlaugh:

>>jwizard >>Aurora Burst >>Naked Snake Thanks for the love everypony! Hope to see you whenever I post next!

Awwwww that was great

No offense but I felt the end was kinda rushed just a little but overall AMAZING story

6811302 I'm honored! Don't feel pressured or rushed, but I'm excited!

I hope you could've made even a mini-epilogue, like described the events of the confession more, but from start to end, I liked it. Just lacked a better ending(in terms of length).

Still great read. Thumbs up

6910758 Thanks for the feedback, and thanks for the read!

This was amazing! I hope that you are planning on making a sequel on this because this NEEDS a sequel!

Well done, great job!

:twilightsmile:

6999089 Whoa, thanks a whole bunch! I appreciate the read, and I don't know about a direct sequel but more Twidash to come!

6999106

Thats great news! Even if you don't make a direct sequel, I will surely look at any other TwiDash stories that you write or have already written. TwiDash is one of my fav couples.

Hmmm. Yes, this is sufficiently adorable. I approve.

Seriously though, a good light and fluffy read. Well done.

This was the first fanfic i ever read. Yay:yay:

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